Methinks you're a line short - but who's counting? LOL (Pperhaps a penultimate line could be added 'and making me feel vexed', which would complete your rondolet nicely?)
This is why my writing doesn't follow any rules because to me, there are no rules to what we write, unless of course you wish to go by their constrictions. I like Haiku and Tanka, they're lovely but all this sestena and such, they can keep it. I like my words to flow and go like a river, free. So Sheryy, your little rhyme suits me, just fine, dammit, Somehow I managed to make that rhyme too...LOLOL
Hee hee. I cant believe I didnt count the lines:) SO typical. Love the idea of the protest poem. And considering I was FEELING vexed, that would have been a perfect word to use had I thought of it. Perhaps I was just hexed:)
And you rhymed. And your poem was humorous. I don't mind rhyme, but I can't write humor.
ReplyDeleteMethinks you're a line short - but who's counting? LOL
ReplyDelete(Pperhaps a penultimate line could be added 'and making me feel vexed', which would complete your rondolet nicely?)
Actually, two lines short, but who's counting? This is what I call a protest poem, and very enjoyable it is too!
ReplyDeleteViv, you can obviously count better than Cad! Its still a fun rhyme, whatever it gets called! LOL ! :0)
ReplyDeleteThis is why my writing doesn't follow any rules because to me, there are no rules to what we write, unless of course you wish to go by their constrictions. I like Haiku and Tanka, they're lovely but all this sestena and such, they can keep it. I like my words to flow and go like a river, free.
ReplyDeleteSo Sheryy, your little rhyme suits me, just fine, dammit, Somehow I managed to make that rhyme too...LOLOL
This made me laugh, Sherry.. the ballad of the over-taxed poet lol
ReplyDeleteHee hee. I cant believe I didnt count the lines:) SO typical. Love the idea of the protest poem. And considering I was FEELING vexed, that would have been a perfect word to use had I thought of it. Perhaps I was just hexed:)
ReplyDeleteYes! You did it, Sherry. I admire your dedication to the process.
ReplyDeletehah!
ReplyDeleteI love how fun this is and how you added drama to the mix :D
ReplyDeleteGood for you, Sherry! We all have to be able to laugh at ourselves sometime.
ReplyDeleteDoggone, I wish that I had seen this before my own 3 hour struggle!
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