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And you rhymed. And your poem was humorous. I don't mind rhyme, but I can't write humor.
Methinks you're a line short - but who's counting? LOL(Pperhaps a penultimate line could be added 'and making me feel vexed', which would complete your rondolet nicely?)
Actually, two lines short, but who's counting? This is what I call a protest poem, and very enjoyable it is too!
Viv, you can obviously count better than Cad! Its still a fun rhyme, whatever it gets called! LOL ! :0)
This is why my writing doesn't follow any rules because to me, there are no rules to what we write, unless of course you wish to go by their constrictions. I like Haiku and Tanka, they're lovely but all this sestena and such, they can keep it. I like my words to flow and go like a river, free.So Sheryy, your little rhyme suits me, just fine, dammit, Somehow I managed to make that rhyme too...LOLOL
This made me laugh, Sherry.. the ballad of the over-taxed poet lol
Hee hee. I cant believe I didnt count the lines:) SO typical. Love the idea of the protest poem. And considering I was FEELING vexed, that would have been a perfect word to use had I thought of it. Perhaps I was just hexed:)
Yes! You did it, Sherry. I admire your dedication to the process.
I love how fun this is and how you added drama to the mix :D
Good for you, Sherry! We all have to be able to laugh at ourselves sometime.
Doggone, I wish that I had seen this before my own 3 hour struggle!
I so appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Thank you so much. I will be over to see you soon!