tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post6513151420807284434..comments2024-03-28T10:41:36.403-07:00Comments on STARDREAMING With Sherry Blue Sky: A RondeletSherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-290665385116532302011-09-02T18:06:51.505-07:002011-09-02T18:06:51.505-07:00Doggone, I wish that I had seen this before my own...Doggone, I wish that I had seen this before my own 3 hour struggle!Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-83419209410440698902011-09-02T05:29:31.633-07:002011-09-02T05:29:31.633-07:00Good for you, Sherry! We all have to be able to l...Good for you, Sherry! We all have to be able to laugh at ourselves sometime.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-18447627375056419112011-09-01T17:01:52.647-07:002011-09-01T17:01:52.647-07:00I love how fun this is and how you added drama to ...I love how fun this is and how you added drama to the mix :DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-30729169302096085032011-09-01T09:27:51.909-07:002011-09-01T09:27:51.909-07:00hah!hah!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-13891592608549166442011-09-01T08:00:25.476-07:002011-09-01T08:00:25.476-07:00Yes! You did it, Sherry. I admire your dedication ...Yes! You did it, Sherry. I admire your dedication to the process.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-90089302054533177222011-09-01T07:49:37.505-07:002011-09-01T07:49:37.505-07:00Hee hee. I cant believe I didnt count the lines:) ...Hee hee. I cant believe I didnt count the lines:) SO typical. Love the idea of the protest poem. And considering I was FEELING vexed, that would have been a perfect word to use had I thought of it. Perhaps I was just hexed:)Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-736819252468292942011-09-01T06:26:01.076-07:002011-09-01T06:26:01.076-07:00This made me laugh, Sherry.. the ballad of the ove...This made me laugh, Sherry.. the ballad of the over-taxed poet lolKerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-20500226601869149852011-09-01T04:41:47.846-07:002011-09-01T04:41:47.846-07:00This is why my writing doesn't follow any rule...This is why my writing doesn't follow any rules because to me, there are no rules to what we write, unless of course you wish to go by their constrictions. I like Haiku and Tanka, they're lovely but all this sestena and such, they can keep it. I like my words to flow and go like a river, free.<br />So Sheryy, your little rhyme suits me, just fine, dammit, Somehow I managed to make that rhyme too...LOLOLDaydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-91993889985106925882011-09-01T02:41:26.541-07:002011-09-01T02:41:26.541-07:00Viv, you can obviously count better than Cad! Its ...Viv, you can obviously count better than Cad! Its still a fun rhyme, whatever it gets called! LOL ! :0)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-67508323437130655252011-09-01T01:26:56.959-07:002011-09-01T01:26:56.959-07:00Actually, two lines short, but who's counting?...Actually, two lines short, but who's counting? This is what I call a protest poem, and very enjoyable it is too!vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-31547024085104094782011-09-01T00:53:53.500-07:002011-09-01T00:53:53.500-07:00Methinks you're a line short - but who's c...Methinks you're a line short - but who's counting? LOL<br />(Pperhaps a penultimate line could be added <b>'and making me feel vexed'</b>, which would complete your rondolet nicely?)Cadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16184350413033668517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-79509520315499859422011-08-31T23:09:55.645-07:002011-08-31T23:09:55.645-07:00And you rhymed. And your poem was humorous. I don&...And you rhymed. And your poem was humorous. I don't mind rhyme, but I can't write humor.Mike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com