She wants edgy
but I'm all soft surfaces,
for life has honed me smooth
and knocked off all
my bumps and corners.
She wants specifics
but my brain is soup.
I pluck out familiar things
I can identify, a branch, a leaf,
but when it comes to the names
of moss, moss is just moss to me,
and beautiful enough that way.
She wants poems about
the being-ness of trees,
when I am still trying to master
being a human loving trees.
I need to go into the woods
and stare at a tree, allow it
to reveal its specific self to me.
Then maybe I can write
about what it is to be a tree
in this world that is so dangerous
to trees, and you, and me.
Day 10. An editor here in Tofino is doing a tree poem anthology that is going to be amazing. I am struggling with submission guidelines, non-specific as I am, and prone to generalities.
I love this poem. It is creative and thought provoking and has such tender, honest feelings. Your struggles in writing about trees is paying off.
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