At Poets United, the Vice-Versa prompt words are:
jagged/smooth and lack/abundance. Good words.
Given time,
life
smoothes out
the jagged edges
of our hearts.
With experience,
every lack
we once
perceived
turns to
abundance.
Finding a fit for jagged edges is the source of many experiences...
ReplyDeleteGreat Poem :-)
Nice one!:)
ReplyDeleteWow, Sherry! This is impressive. So few words, such big meaning. I am so hoping that life will stay smoothed out for a while now. I am tired of jagged. Blessings to you!
ReplyDeleteA powerful, inspiring way to offer encouragement!
ReplyDeleteexperience I am gaining, time I have plenty (I hope)...now to find that patience thing...
ReplyDeleteSuch wisdom and patience come from your words, Sherry. Well written! I love how the first stanza reminds me of sea glass!
ReplyDeleteI love the hope and optimism in this!
ReplyDeleteMinimal words, maximum meaning. You've made the complex simple and visible. Your time and experience shows.
ReplyDeletea beautiful philosophy, beautifully written, Sherry!
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a beautiful philosophy, beautifully written, Sherry!
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So much inspiration in this. Brilliant
ReplyDeleteSuch wonderful hope in your words, "every lack we once perceived turns to abundance". May it be so. Love this poem. I hope all the jagged edges of our hearts are smoothed out. You have all my dreams wrapped up in one small poem. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThat is so true. We have a choice don't we?... either to see the glass as half empty or, half full.
ReplyDeleteLovely Sherry!
Lovely philosophy!
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