Umbrella Street in Izmir, Turkey
Soft and silky, undulating overhead
~ coloured moon jellies in the sky.
for Toni's cool prompt at Real Toads: to write a two line poem with an unexpected image, after the style of Ezra Pound, whom I cant even attempt to emulate, as I have the mother of all headaches. But this image sprang to mind.
Indeed! They do look like moon jellies in the sky..
ReplyDeleteI just picked up one of my parasols and spun it around a bit, saying, "Colored moon jellies!" and squealing. How I love this description, Sherry!
ReplyDeleteI like the prompt and your words that totally change the meaning of the image. Moon jellies, yes...
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Fantastic juxtaposition!
ReplyDeleteLove. <3
ReplyDeleteWhat a great contrast...
ReplyDeleteI don't know if you remember this, but in the '80s, we wore shoes called jellies. So this makes me think of little girls lying on their backs with their bright "electric" shoes in the sky while they cloud watch. :)
ReplyDeleteVery clever!
ReplyDeleteIt's a good image for you poem, Rosemary. I'd love to see your sky.
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Um, not me, Jim!
DeleteBoth pictures are beautiful, and I quite see why the one reminded you of the other. I would not have known what 'moon jellies' were without the image. Are they dangerous? Anything in Australian waters that looked like that would have people getting out of the water fast!
ReplyDeleteI THINK maybe they sting. But my friend lives on a floathouse in a cove that sometimes FILLS with the moon jellies......and she swims among them. So maybe not.
DeleteOh I love this, sky and sea!
ReplyDeleteMoon Jellies! I love the juxtaposition. On the east coast farther down south, the jellies sting and are poisonous. but I love the image!
ReplyDeleteColored moon jellies is a wonderfully apt description.
ReplyDeleteI'd not come across the expression 'moon jellies' before, Sherry. Now I want to twirl an umbrella and shout that word out loud!
ReplyDeleteLove both images.
ReplyDeleteAre they good enough to eat?:)
ReplyDeleteI love the term "moon jellies in the sky." Beautiful and unexpected.
ReplyDeleteI tried writing a poem about jelly fish once. It didn't work well. Yet, you write a two line poem and it's perfect. Marvelous, I love this. Hope you lose your headache.
ReplyDeleteGreat lines, Sherry. Love "moon jellies".
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