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Wednesday, May 24, 2017
Summer Blooms
I remember the soft scented evenings
of summer, when I was a girl:
peony and lilac, sweet pea and nasturtium,
japonica and geranium and tall hollyhocks
in my grandmother's garden.
I liked to think the garden
was a village for fairies,
who took shelter under the leaves
during afternoon thunderstorms.
I remember the smell of earth
rising up, sharp, metallic,
in the moments just before the rain,
my Grandma and I exchanging smiles
in her back porch.
How she loved a good thunderstorm!
I love them still; that smell of coming rain
always takes me back to
summertime Kelowna, in the 60's.
And I am fifteen again,
standing under white blossoms in City Park,
as a brown-eyed boy hands me a bloom,
sweetly saying: "Poor man's orchid,"
just before my first
broken heart.
for Susan's prompt at Midweek Motif: Flowers
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Why is it that flowers so often precede broken hearts?
ReplyDeletethe eyes of the soul remember the beauty they beheld, the soul forever beholds, as the heart struggles to forget.
ReplyDeletewonderful reflection, mi amiga
the eyes of the soul remember the beauty they beheld, the soul forever beholds, as the heart struggles to forget.
ReplyDeletewonderful reflection, mi amiga
Luv the world of events in your flower story. Sherry
ReplyDeleteHappy Wednesday
Much love...
oooooOO! Twilight faerie tales and Grandmother's porch and the first broken heart! perfect. I like the list of flowers, too. (Mine would add snapdragons.)
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ReplyDeleteYou brought bck memories of my own Grandmother, her garden was very much like your Grandmother's garden. We are so lucky to have these memories. I remember sitting on ther porch swing, she would sew little clothes for my dolls, and we would sing, in the sweet scents from the garden, always nasturtiums along the sidewalk.
ReplyDeleteYou brought back memories for me as well, Sherry. I loved the smell of earth, and loved to watch the thunder storms progress across the fields. You write so beautifully!
ReplyDeleteThis is soo lovely, I love "soft scented evenings of summer" evocative write, Sherry❤️
ReplyDeleteSuch warm memories. I like the bittersweet ending. Oh, to be 15 again. Love how you wrote to this prompt, how flowers are part of your fond memories.
ReplyDeleteMy grandmother had a huge garden and there were always flowers along its edges. Thanks for the memories,
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Congratulations. You stirred up many fond memories. Summers were our favorite season too.
ReplyDeleteCharming memories of your Grandma's
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I liked to think the garden
ReplyDeletewas a village for fairies,
Yes, I imagine you would like to think that and I still do...
lovely memories Sherry
I think it was my Aunty's garden that entranced me which was huge. I could never understand how she managed to keep it so free from weeds! What a beautiful poem this is Sherry.
ReplyDeletethe imagery is so vivid. nostalgia is clearly felt. beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWhat a magical journey - i could picture you back then.. beautiful as always :-)
ReplyDeleteA wonderful, delightful and vivid world you paint Sherry, even with your 'first broken heart'. Such lovely memories!
ReplyDeleteah. beautiful and that peculiar combination of sad and happy. lovely ~
ReplyDeleteAh, what a poignant memory, now more sweet than bitter.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful poem, Sherry, documentig both sweet and bitter memories you associate with the flowers of your youth...
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