We are born in a whoosh of water;
gasp in our first breath, then we cry:
water, essential, from our very first day.
Through the Sacred Medicine Wheel
I journeyed,
dipped my toes in a magical sea,
soul thrumming with the song of the waves.
My sign, my element, my spirit's home:
Mother Ocean.
I journeyed,
dipped my toes in a magical sea,
soul thrumming with the song of the waves.
My sign, my element, my spirit's home:
Mother Ocean.
Above, the sky, the vast expanse,
curving over all -
the great blue bowl of ether.
Underfoot, the earth, brown and humble
and mothering.
curving over all -
the great blue bowl of ether.
Underfoot, the earth, brown and humble
and mothering.
I bow to you, Sky, I sing with you, Wind,
I dance in the rain, laughing,
the rush of raindrops on my face
cleansing my spirit,
I dance in the rain, laughing,
the rush of raindrops on my face
cleansing my spirit,
washing all negative energy away.
When I am clean,
when the Great Bowl Above grows dark,
I creep homeward,
settle beside the fire,
remember the winking stars,
the wheeling seabirds,
when the Great Bowl Above grows dark,
I creep homeward,
settle beside the fire,
remember the winking stars,
the wheeling seabirds,
the many rivers and beaches
I have loved,
all the beauty gracing
I have loved,
all the beauty gracing
this span of time
that is still mine.
that is still mine.
In memory,
my grandmother's long, white finger
points at the glass of water
on her bedside table
as she lay dying.
"The dying always ask for water,"
she had told me, and it is true.
Water: a single tear rolling down her cheek
as we said goodbye.
To the earth I bow, in gratitude,
in homecoming.
It waits to receive me, in turn,
when that final moment comes,
when I will become one
with All That Is.
in homecoming.
It waits to receive me, in turn,
when that final moment comes,
when I will become one
with All That Is.
First, there is water,
at the end
only earth and sky.
at the end
only earth and sky.
I re-worked a poem from 2015 for my prompt at Real Toads: Messages From Water.
And sharing with the Poetry Pantry at Poets United, fine reading every Sunday morning.
And sharing with the Poetry Pantry at Poets United, fine reading every Sunday morning.
Wow, Sherry, this is a moving and powerful poem. If ever you do another book, be sure to include this one. The memory of your grandmother's death was wonderfully and movingly told. We have so much to be thankful in this life; and the water, earth, and sky will eventually welcome us home as it has welcomed others in the past! Lovely written, lovingly written.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mary. I do love this wonderful earth!
DeleteA beautiful poem, the second stanza really spoke to me, Sherry.
ReplyDeleteI felt satisfyingly submerged as I dived into your poem, Sherry, with ‘a whoosh of water’. That is such a beautiful line: ‘soul thrumming with the song of the waves’, it gave me goosebumps! I also love the lines:
ReplyDelete‘Above, the sky, the vast expanse,
curving over all -
the great blue bowl of ether.
Underfoot, the earth, brown and humble
and mothering’
and
First, there is water,
at the end
only earth and sky.’
"I will become one
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I love those words. It brings to mind the way I feel about endings (especially the big one). It reminds me that all ends are new beginnings (and I love an adventure!).
This is beautiful. It reads like a thankful prayer to nature.
ReplyDeleteThe last few lines are haunting.. Your oneness with nature and its elements is expressed so beautifully...
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ReplyDeleteWhat a stunning poem - so full of life and in the last verse wisdom. I love how you carry the sea and blueness throughout
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely stunning, Sherry!💖 Especially love; "When I am clean, when the Great Bowl Above grows dark,I creep homeward, settle beside the fire,remember the winking stars, the wheeling seabirds,
ReplyDeletethe many rivers and beaches I have loved,
all the beauty gracing this span of time
that is still mine."😊
living among nature and watching the sky and earth is a remarkable journey to me. such wisdom and knowledge you have in this poem. Great stuff.
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this span of time
that is still mine."
This is extremely loving and beautiful
Happy you dropped by my sumue Sunday today Sherry
Much❤🕊❤love
This is a wonderful poem. The water at your grandmothers deathbed is especially moving... sometimes I think of life as a river where we start out as a mountain rivulet and in the end we become the sea.
ReplyDeleteVery moving memories Sherry! One cant help but appreciate water as the healthiest element. It has been said regular intake of water can solve 99% of all ills.
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Beautiful Water is life.So precious and so little of it pristine now.
ReplyDeletethis is a stunning poem, Sherry.
ReplyDeleteperhaps you have seen the future, in the end only earth and sky?
That's just luscious, Sherry. "soul thrumming with the song of the waves" - it's so true. We are the sea's children.
ReplyDeleteThe ending of your poem presages the ending of every living thing: We become earth, and our spirits soar to the sky.
ReplyDeleteI remembered about your grandmother's death from a previous read. This is an amazing write Sherry. I agree with Bjorn. I remember in one of Stephen King's books, the reference to our lives being like a river. We travel along until in the end, we are consumed by the sea and become one. I am still moved by your grandmother's death. The last act I did for my mother was to feed her a few drops of water.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you will the tale of the passing of your grandmother In with an ode to the elements. Exquisite,Sherry.
ReplyDeleteWhat an exquisite poem Sherry!
ReplyDeleteI resonated with this poem, just as the
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water to nourish it. Lovely images.
Thank you.
Less a poem than a shaman song -- it's that good, that true, that old.
ReplyDeleteA shaman song. I love that. Thank you, Brendan.
DeleteThis is really beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you, my friends. Sometimes I wish I could still write poems like this. But I am grateful that, for a few years at least, I did. LOL. I think my inner wild woman may have gone to sleep a little bit ahead of me. Hee hee.
ReplyDeleteSo many thoughts gather--the end carried sadness and blessing and the image of cleansing rain made me think of all the gas and dust and anger that build up under these hot summer skies. A lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteI agree with one and all. This IS beautiful … wonderful … lovely … exquisite … really, adjectives fail. The depths of the water symbolism you express so eloquently, here, is masterfully articulated and evokes a flood of thoughts and feelings.
ReplyDeleteYet another one I place up there, on that crowded pinnacle with your very best work, Sherry. A shunning piece with a lasting and distinctive poem-echo. Brilliant writing!
It is difficullt to add much to the comments above as this is a wonderful, heartfelt poem telling of yourself Sherry. I feel sad that so much water in the world is given to miners and we have to pay dearly for it, rather than the other way round.
ReplyDeleteJust perfect, Sherry. Of course it should be, you are the 'mother of the prompt.' It is very good, a fun one to write for. There were sooo many options. I was surprised about the tear drop, that part was sad on the Grandmother's passing.
ReplyDeleteThe Ocean concept being the Spirit Mother part was neat too.
The Bible writers also had this cycle figured out, some even mention the clouds. Rivers to the sea evaporate to the clouds which drop rain to replenish the seas. I like Solomon's best, Ecclesiastes 1:7.
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This is beautiful. "the dying always ask for water" Wow, that is powerful. Perhaps since water is life we ask for it at death to strengthen us for the journey to the afterlife.
ReplyDeletethe grandmother line is so powerful ~
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