I awake in the deep dark
of the night to see
a huge round full-faced moon
staring in at me
as if it had zoomed close
with my eyes closed,
I catching it unawares
before it rose.
There she sat,
perched in the bowl
of my old tree,
like an over-sized Christmas ornament
thus adorning just for me
the starkly bare
and brittle branches and,
much more,
allowing me to see its beauty
closer
than I ever have
before.
I stare back:
eternal purveyor
of myth and mystery,
as if it holds the secret
of whatever is to be
and has ventured thus
to urge me forth
from out my purple bed,
to find a path
where all my dreams
can be
much better fed.
This radiant so-close moon
and I agree:
surrender to no man,
and yet in giving
I'm most free.
This silvery ambassador
is urging me
to give all that I can -
Mandarin Midnight Moon
that sailed here
last night
from Japan.
A poem from 2002. I woke in the night to see the moon so close, it looked like she was hanging in my big tree, as if she had zoomed close.....as I came more awake, she drifted back a ways. Smiles.
Sharing this oldie with the Poetry Pantry at Poets United this Sunday. Come join us!
Sharing this oldie with the Poetry Pantry at Poets United this Sunday. Come join us!
What a wonderful experience to see such a moon. Must have been glorious I like the message of giving all that one can & to surrender to no man. So much wisdom in this poem!
ReplyDeleteOh, so beautiful! And the rhyming enhances it, I note.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed that poem!!
ReplyDeleteA whimsical poem, Sherry! I love the idea of the ‘huge round full-faced moon’ peeking in at us before we catch it unawares, and the extended simile of the ‘over-sized Christmas ornament’ is beautiful. I also enjoyed the alliterative ‘Mandarin Midnight Moon’ – all the way from Japan!
ReplyDeleteI love the purple bed and how close you get to the moon...truly magical
ReplyDeleteMy goodness this is exquisite!!❤️ I love, love; "I stare back: eternal purveyor of myth and mystery, as if it holds the secret of whatever is to be and has ventured thus to urge me forth from out my purple bed, to find a path where all my dreams can be much better fed."❤️
ReplyDeleteIt was the end of my last attempt at romance, lol, which was a dismal disappointment.......I needed better fed dreams.
DeleteI love the serenity and strength of this piece. In the moon's soothing presence we can be still enough to hear what our hearts knew all along.
ReplyDeleteYou really have such a beautiful store of poetry Sherry. This one is especially delighful.
ReplyDeleteWe have so much fun with the moon! Perched and hanging like an ornament, yes. Purple and the moon go well together. The stuff of fairy tales.
ReplyDeleteHi there Sherry - Yes indeed some of the secrets of life itself coming that much closer to you, as the result of such reflection - lovely piece...
ReplyDeleteI do love that mandarin moon. I have felt the moon call me from a deep dream.
ReplyDeleteI will be drumming today, to the beat of flutes and my inner heart.
This reaffirms in me that illustrated poems shouldn't just be for kids--this would make such a wonderful book to read at night before bed. :)
ReplyDeleteSo true. I'd buy a copy!
DeleteAn oversized Christmas bauble sailing all the way from Japan. Lovely whimsicaland would make a great animation poem.
ReplyDeleteAn enveloping wave of moonlight in verse...lovely. "a path where all my dreams can be much better fed" - may we all find a path like this!
ReplyDeleteI'm smiling from ear to ear, enjoy the bright through your words. I love the effect the moon--especially one as full as you describe--has on us. And your poem shows that feeling so clearly.
ReplyDeleteDon't you just love visitations like this? Not only are they sacred for the moment, but they are seared into your memory forever. Ahh...
ReplyDeleteYes. I can see her still, in the branches of that bare old tree.
DeleteDeliciously refreshing to see this moon so up close. That sight, alone will shake poetry out of anyone!
ReplyDeleteSuch a sweet, volupt emissary, that Moon, silvering all you welcome. Great array of images and affirmations here. I've been dreaming so much of my mother these past weeks and months, the lunar tide must by waxing somewhere in the heart ...
ReplyDeleteAnd to think we have a full harvest moon on the 13th. I love this poem and its whimsical tone.
ReplyDeleteI would love to have such a conversation with a moon... (a mandarin moon even)
ReplyDeleteoh i love your Mandarin moon Sherry. great work!
ReplyDeleteAn enchanted moment beautifully painted with pen. Serendipitous sightings such as this often, leave in the wake of their transcendence, an insight or even a purpose that was not framed in thought or words, before. Just lovely, Sherry.
ReplyDeleteI posted an Oldie this week, too. Yours is spectacular. So many moon poems; rare to find one that jumps out as well as this. Salute!
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