Commissioned Piece (Untitled)
Used with Permission
Catbird
under a fallen moon -
the lights are on
in the castle
but nobody's home.
The throne
sits empty.
No birds sing
in the bare brown branches
of winter.
The court jester
is issuing weird proclamations
that alarm
the populace.
The commoners
have all run away.
No cream
for kitty
when the sky
has fallen.
55 for Kerry's Art Flash at Toads, inspired by the art of McMonster. It might be construed as political commentary. LOL.
Best kind of political commentary, smart and sophisticated.
ReplyDeleteLights are on but nobody's home. I love it!
ReplyDeleteI had another look and I could see your catbird, but my owl called out to me again! I love that you’ve focused on the empty castle with its empty throne. I enjoyed the court jester dig – I can’t believe some of the things I’ve been reading!
ReplyDeleteLOL, even before I saw your note I wondered if it was political commentary! I hope we Americans can get rid of our Irate Pumpkin before long.
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely brilliant, Sherry!! Love the political reference.
ReplyDeleteMeanwhile the rest of the world is thinking just what happened to one of the most powerful nations on Earth and is now just a laughing stock yet frightenly dangerous.
ReplyDeleteit could always catch and eat itself, I guess. Or sit in the catbird seat.
ReplyDeletePoor Kitty. And the catbird? My bird was a catbird at first too, but I needed a one syllable word so I changed back too an owl.
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This is wonderful, Sherry. I love it as a fantasy, and as a metaphor for current affairs!
ReplyDeleteOoh I love the magic and scene..and the fact that we both saw a cat!
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ReplyDeleteYour words are beautiful Sherry. I love the focus on the empty castle and throne.
ReplyDelete"lights are on and nobody home" This seems to be our way of life lately.
ReplyDeleteI find it weird when the jester sits on the throne... when it's all about ratings, and not what's real
ReplyDeleteI was always a fan of the court jester but what does he do when there is no king on the throne? He makes proclamations of his own that may be more truth than humour! And that is frightening indeed!
ReplyDeleteEngaging piece Sherry, and I really like this closing stanza:
ReplyDelete“No cream
for kitty
when the sky
has fallen.”
True that, my friend
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