We tripped across the forest floor.
The green trees formed a maze.
I was looking for a fairy door
to escape my wistful days.
But I was just a mortal
accustomed to the blues,
no luck finding a portal,
no bright red magic shoes.
I told her of a vision
I had had, a ghostly tale.
It brought a tear into her eye
and made her face go pale.
There was a humming all around us,
and I was searching for a song.
The trees and bees were buzzing
as we wandered all along.
It was the sunniest of summers,
the sky a purity of blue,
and had I seen the years that lay ahead
I would have wept, then, too.
for Shay's Word List, inspired by Procol Harum's Whiter Shade of Pale, such a haunting melody.
Indeed, it's a good thing that we can't know the future, we'd lose our minds and give up if we could.
ReplyDeleteDear Sherry, poet, memoirist, star dreamer, I wish you a Happy, Health filled New Year. Thank you for being a constant and wonderful friend to Shaista. Sending good thoughts and Love always - Perveen
ReplyDeleteA beautiful saudade that captures that sense of melancholic longing we have when "the world is too much with us." Wishing you a happy new year, Sherry, full of blessing and beautiful poetry.
ReplyDelete"But I was just a mortal
ReplyDeleteaccustomed to the blues,
no luck finding a portal,
no bright red magic shoes."
oh i wish there was such a portal. love the sounds in this poem, and great use of the word list
Sherry- Absolutely lovely.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, Sherry, with a poignant ending. Has a bit of a Pan's Labyrinth energy about it.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't agree more. The last few years have been really tough. It's so hard to stay positive. But this is a beautiful poem. I love how you've used the words and also kind of kept with the mood/theme of the original song. I'm from https://outofthecave.blog
ReplyDeleteWhat a way to begin the New Year with this stellar poem. It is truly magical.
ReplyDeleteGoodness I love this poem. I too wish I could find a fairy door, a place of magic and escape. Beautiful writing
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