For this poem, there needs to be
a fox, somewhere out in the country,
and my grandmother's garden:
and my grandmother's garden:
sweet pea and peony, lilac and pinks
scenting the air
scenting the air
on sweet summer evenings. There
needs to be a girl in a soft blue cotton dress,
reading love letters, under the weeping willow,
a shiver of mixed
a shiver of mixed
fear and delight at
whatever comes next.
whatever comes next.
For this poem, the girl is now a grandmother
herself, her letters all tucked in a box
under her bed, never read any more.
What came next deserved every shiver
until she moved on.
What came next deserved every shiver
until she moved on.
In this poem, a fox creeps out of the bush
from deep in the forest. It looks at her,
smiling, that young girl grown old,
then pounces back into
the radiant green,
then pounces back into
the radiant green,
and is gone.
For Shay's Word list, and the inspiration of The Garden by Moonlight by Amy Lowell. Shared with earthweal's open link.
I love how you are speaking of the poem from the outside looking in. This is one gorgeous representation of the poet's heart and all that is beautiful Sherry! I love it!!
ReplyDelete"Garden By Moonlight" is one of Amy Lowell's best in my view (and the source of the word "lilac" on the list) and this poem is definitely one of YOUR best, Sherry. There is not a word in it that doesn't burst with life and wisdom.
ReplyDeleteI think many poems need a fox! In all seriousness, this is lovely
ReplyDeleteI love all the beautiful analogies and imagery in this poem which is underscored with a gentle romantic feeling :-)
ReplyDeleteOoooh! That was beautifully done. Every line perfectly balanced, and standing both outside and within the poem was fantastic. The ending with the fox in and then out of the poem was perfect.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful "What came next deserved every shiver until she moved on." Love that line.
ReplyDeleteI like the fox.
ReplyDeleteLoved it! For this Poem we needed Sherry's deft and eloquent touch!
ReplyDeleteWritten as only you could my friend. One to read more than once for sure.
ReplyDeleteLovely introspection... beautifully rendered.
ReplyDeleteOnly the fox in us can leap back into the radiant garden. Our human use is so finished. A really great use of measure and tone to accomplish the wonder of that leap.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is absolutely superb! It picked me up and carried me through memories that became my own. And yes, the fox was essential to the alchemy here. Thank you for this.
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous Sherry. Love the fox and the shifting point of view. the sweet- sad wisdom shining through. A lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteTrying to comment for a third time. Hope all three don't show up at the same time.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem Sherry. Love the fox and that the fox is needed. Love the shifting point of view and the sweet-sad wisdom shining through. A beautiful read.
I love your fox poem. Excellent. We need more foxes. They are essential in many ways.
ReplyDeleteI love your fox poem!!!
ReplyDeleteI forgot that after a week, comments need moderation and I was slow on the uptake. Sorry, folks.
ReplyDeleteI like the transition from the young girl reading the love letters to Grandma with the love letters still tucked away under her bed. Nice one !
ReplyDeleteExcellent piece Sherry - love the flow, and the scent of the flowers!
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