There is a dangerous old woman
who lives in the forest.
Her house is whittled inside a tree trunk,
and her music is the rainfall on the leaves.
"Whu-hoo", says the owl
on the cobbled doorstep,
blinking her yellow eyes
and rustling her feathers.
"To enter, you must have passed
sixty years of seasons.
The map of your life
must be drawn upon your face,
and your eyes droop with
sadness and the memory
of your journey.
Yes. You are
sad enough and wise enough
to pass."
I enter and, within, the fire is blazing.
A grizzled white-haired crone bends
to pour my tea.
"And what are you wondering?
What question brings you here?"
she asks,
dipping a dainty finger
in her teacup
and stirring.
"What do I have to do,
to have my dwelling in a tree?"
"Grow back your clipped wings,
and remember how to fly."
Yes! A fable of paradox and identity! I like the dialogue.
ReplyDelete:)loved it
ReplyDeleteOh, Sherry. Profound, and whimsical at the same time! How do you do that?
ReplyDeleteChuckles, that touch of humour nicely done! Great take Sherry!
ReplyDeleteHank
I love this, my friend. It really speaks to me. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteOh yes. Let's grow wings and fly. Love this Sherry. It's wonderful how you conjure up such a magical little story.
ReplyDeleteOh wow Sherry the imagery is so vivid and those last lines wow, Profound indeed =)
ReplyDeleteThis was a delight to read, Sherry!! Definitely GOOD advice.
ReplyDeleteYou brought us right into myth today.
ReplyDeleteYou will now have me checking trees in the woods... :)
ReplyDeleteI love the gate keeper's photo! I love this tale-I have some golden thread from the sun if you need it! Great poem Sherry :D
ReplyDeleteI love the story ~ Someday, I want to go there & have tea with that wise woman ~
ReplyDeleteNicely done.
ReplyDeleteOh it's so beautiful!!! I love the way the poem is a story with a lesson and how apt the lesson is!
ReplyDeleteI truly enjoyed this one :)
delightful storyline.....and a cool ending....loved it :)
ReplyDeleteA living piece of magic in this beautiful tale. Love the advice at the end, but especially love the lines:
ReplyDelete"Her house is whittled inside a tree trunk,
and her music is the rainfall on the leaves..."
I enjoyed your poem and how you make us feel the presence of nature. I love your advice at the end!
ReplyDeleteOh, this is so beautifully penned, Sherry. Honestly, enjoyed the wonderful surroundings! Love it...
ReplyDeleteoh, what a brilliant ending answer.
ReplyDeleteoh Sherry, it seems we are continuously clipping and growing, clipping and growing... this too is part of the journey... the sadness, the joy. BEautiful, beautiful poem my friend.
ReplyDeleteOh MY !! Sherry! this is truly a trip through the looking glass - into the wooded tree - just as someone else has said "wonderful and whimsical" and most startlingly powerful absolutely authentic in its voice ... Wonderful. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteYes, so hard to grow them back once they're clipped. Funny the way life beats us up and then we have to learn all over again how to live.
ReplyDeleteher music is the sound of rainfall on trees....you hooked me early with that one....what a thing to learn in the end as well...to fly again....a wise woman surely...
ReplyDeletethere's a lesson to be learned here : "Grow back your clipped wings,
ReplyDeleteand remember how to fly."
great work! :)
Yes!
ReplyDeleteZQ
60 years... ok..got that! Now to work in the wings.
ReplyDeleteOh Sherry--I loved, loved this--it made me cry and laugh at the same time---
ReplyDeleteBrilliant! I loved it and I loved the 'remember how to fly' at the end.
ReplyDeleteNice one Sherry! Flying is such a great, tantalising prospect!
ReplyDeletePerfection - wisdom!
ReplyDeleteOh, so many of us have forgotten how to fly
ReplyDeleteSounds easy enough.
ReplyDeleteI wrote a piece not too long ago....
ReplyDeleteTea in the Forest
The gentle Deer
Watches me
From sheltered
Hiding place
Behind the tree
As I watch Rabbit
Dressed for tea
Dance the dance
For all to see
Blossoms
A great disguise
For tea
Red flowers in
Your hair
Friends gather
Round
For rituals
Of tea
Has to be done
Just this way
A tradition
You say
You arrive
In time
Past and present
Shake hands
And rhyme
Dressed in your finest
Greenery and wine
Hold out your hands
Embrace everyone
Tea for you
Tea for me
Tea for all
Will the Hatter pour
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Indeed, that is the only way - such wisdom, Sherry, and such a delightfully told 'story'...
ReplyDeleteWonderful, wonderful, wonderful!! I am growing back my clipped wings right now. I am 10 years from 60 yet but it pays to get a head start.
ReplyDeleteThis was amazing! Like a fairytale, only better. Loved it, Sherry!
ReplyDeleteSherry,
ReplyDeleteI so loved those 'sixty years of seasons.' How magical and most fitting!! This was a great adventure taken with your poetic words today. Thank you for the experience:)
Happy Sunday and hope your spirits are refreshed again,
Eileen:)
Love it!
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Yes I'm all for flying at any age. Fluff out your feathers and take off Madam!
ReplyDeleteSherry this was breath-taking and I feel so blessed to have read it. I want to meet that owl! Mystical, whimsical and brimming full of faerie magic. I am a serious fan!
ReplyDeleteGrow back your clipped wings... THAT IS EXACTLY WHAT I'M DOING NOW, SHERRY! And I didn't realize it until I read your poem. You are so often my diviner!
ReplyDeleteWonderful words!
ReplyDeleteLove your header too. :<)
What a fantastic piece Sherry. So many times our wings are clipped by circumstance or simply we "let" circumstances clip our wings. Over the past couple of years I have relearned how to fly.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic piece Sherry. So many times our wings are clipped by circumstance or simply we "let" circumstances clip our wings. Over the past couple of years I have relearned how to fly.
ReplyDeleteHa! This is wonderful. What about having an old and foolish face! This is a lovely piece, Sherry. k.
ReplyDeletereally fabulous finish, Sherry, to this modern fairy tale
ReplyDeletewhat a dazzling little tale. the identity theme is so nicely spun with whimsy.
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