This poem is the breath of dawn on a windswept
morning at the edge of the sea.
This poem is a murrelet on the wing.
This poem is a grey whale, spy-hopping.
This poem is misty with early morning fog.
It drapes shawls over the shoulders of
Grandmother Cedar so she won't be chilled.
This poem loves the morning.
It looks to the sky to see all the colours of the day.
This poem is the breath of dawn on a windswept
morning at the edge of the sea.
This poem is a tiny bird who makes her nest
deep in the forest.
This poem must fly great distances,
out to sea and back again,
in order to find sustenance.
This poem sometimes grows tired,
and in need of rest.
Its perch is precarious,
its nesting sites vanishing
along with the old growth.
This poem is sometimes in need of
rescue and protection.
This poem is a murrelet on the wing.
This poem swooshes up in placid waters,
takes a look around with her wise old eye
and finds that life is good.
This poem is an ancient voice;
she speaks with an old soul.
Then this poem does a series of dives and breaches,
just for the joy of it.
This poem is a grey whale, spy-hopping.
This poem is the breath of dawn, on a windswept
morning at the edge of the sea.
This poem is a murrelet on the wing, heading for home.
This poem is a grey whale, spy-hopping
for the sheer love of living.
This poem is spectacular Sherry! My soul is nestling in your lines. Your love for our Mother Earth shines all through.
ReplyDelete"This poem swooshes up in placid waters,
takes a look around with her wise old eye
and finds that life is good." How beautiful!
This poem is so beautiful Sherry - so many captivating images and a wonderful reflection of the beauties in the world - Jae
ReplyDeleteThis poem is the breath of dawn on a windswept morning at the edge of the sea.
ReplyDeleteGreat opening Sherry! However all through you've given wonderful descriptions of a poem that hangs up high looking on those down below!
Hank
I remember writing these! This metaphor poem is beautifully grey, Sherry, with the tone set by the opening metaphor, ’breath of dawn on a windswept morning at the edge of the sea’, which made me take a big breath before I read on. It reflects your love of nature.
ReplyDeleteThis Boomerang form suits your style so well, Sherry! A delightful poem with imagery that kept my eyes wide in wonder. "It drapes shawls over the shoulders of
ReplyDeleteGrandmother Cedar so she won't be chilled."--especially made me smile.
This poem takes to flight beautifully with its buoyant rhythm.
ReplyDeleteA stunning poem laced with so many beautiful images...Just lovely !
ReplyDeleteThis poem is absolutely beautiful So alive with great images
ReplyDeleteThis is really nice, Sherry. The repetition works beautfiully. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is joy, freedom, love of wild things. This poem is beautiful.
ReplyDelete"This poem is misty with early morning fog.
ReplyDeleteIt drapes shawls over the shoulders of
Grandmother Cedar so she won't be chilled."
Gorgeous poem, Sherry! I like the format you used for it.