Tuesday, July 21, 2026

Bird Math



"A poem should always have birds in it,"
the poet said. And "A person wants to stand
in a happy place in a poem."

Here is the mathematics of this poem:

1. My poems are often full of birds.
    But they are having a hard time
    out-shouting the black-hearted rhetoric
    spewing from my tv screen, that makes
    my heart sink and forget how to sing.

2. How can we stand in a happy place
    in the poem of our lives while
    stormtroopers are beating
    and firing upon peaceful citizens,
    and veterans and mothers,
    and caging children because
    their skin is brown?
    While people are abusing animals
    and hating each other?
    Where the world is in survival mode
    and has forgotten how to be kind?

3. I can tell you that, down by the shore,
    herons are picky-toe-ing peacefully
    along the mudflats.
    I can point out the eagle, surveying
    his kingdom from the top of a snag.
    I can show you my balcony
    full of chattering jays
    and swift little hummers,
    all living in blessed ignorance
    of the weight we humans
    are carrying.

4. Bless them. When we look up
    for a moment to track their
    heart-lifting passage across the sky,
    we remember what it was,
    once, to dream.

Inspired by "Singapore" by Mary Oliver. The italicized lines are hers.


9 comments:

  1. I especially liked the last verse! It is such a peaceful feeling to look up and watch the birds in the sky....and dream!

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  2. The stark contrast between the human world and the avian world hits hard, Sherry.
    Sigh. However I find special joy when I find birds in poetry. Thank you. :)

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  3. I love your bird math poem, Sherry, and bird poems are some of my favourites, together with poems about trees. You’re right:
    ‘How can we stand in a happy place
    in the poem of our lives while
    stormtroopers are beating
    and firing upon peaceful citizens…?’
    My favourite lines are about the herons ‘picky-toe-ing peacefully along the mudflats’ and the ‘chattering jays and swift little hummers’, which help me forget about the turmoil in the world, if only for a moment.

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  4. Can definitely relate to this poem. A tough world out there. Clever using the numbers for the verses to include a maths representation. Hope you are surviving the Bush fires. Trump wants Canada to compensate money wise for polluting America's air...LOL...

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    1. He gets crazier by the month and still everyone nods and smiles. Gah.

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  5. " all living in blessed ignorance
    of the weight we humans
    are carrying."
    The weight of endangerment and unkindness that will touch them nevertheless. The contrast between your environment there and the worlds is stark. Good numbering!

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  6. Yes we are living in heavy times which is a burden to the heart and I absolutely love your last stanza Its beautiful Sherry

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  7. I love your clever structure and the relationship between feeling and nature - what is important - and the mathematics of poems - Jae

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  8. Thank goodness the birds seem themselves. Clever poem, Sherry!

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