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There were no words for all that lay within
till, suddenly, there were all the words,
coming in a torrent like an unblocked river,
or trickling in small eddies
into the far corners of her heart.
Her dad had died that summer
she turned fourteen.
And there began
a Great Unsilencing.
till, suddenly, there were all the words,
coming in a torrent like an unblocked river,
or trickling in small eddies
into the far corners of her heart.
Her dad had died that summer
she turned fourteen.
And there began
a Great Unsilencing.
"The Great Unsilencing"!
ReplyDeletePerfect: from nothing to everything!
Don't know if my first comment made it through or not, but I especially like that first stanza. It echoes my own experience,
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The 'Great Unsilencing'! What a powerful moment in any writer's life.
ReplyDeleteI also loved 'the Great Unsilencing'... Im so impressed that you can remember as well... I saw the prompt too late, but if I hadn't I'm not sure I could have gone back that far and picked a moment. Anyway, lovely piece!
ReplyDeleteWow. What a nice story. How wonderful to be inspired so early in life. You were meant to be a poet and you didn't even have to think about it.
ReplyDeleteI agree, this is a ripple in a huge, deep pond-wow~
ReplyDeleteI too love this feeling of the 'Great Unsilencing'-mind altering magic!
luv the last line, a perfect beginning
ReplyDeletehappy you dropped by to read mine
much love...
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ReplyDeletePerfect start for Day One. Best wishes, Sherry!!
ReplyDeleteIt's hard when your dad dies, even when much older.
You don't have a 'Dad' anymore.
Sounds like the poetry sort of kept you together and going back then.
I'd love to read some of those early poems.
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Poetry does feel like the great unsilencing--beautiful write and beautiful to know where it came from for you
ReplyDeleteThis is short and like the torrent it describes--really well done, Sherry, and very moving. k. (Manicddaily)
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness. Whoosh...goosebumps. Your poem, Sherry, is so affecting and effective. Perfect!
ReplyDeleteYes! What better way to 'unsilence' what begs to come out than with poetry. I love this Sherry.
ReplyDeleteOnce those first drop break the clouds' seal, what follows are wonderful storms... roaring.
ReplyDeleteLove this! ♥
'Unsilencing' is such a beautiful word, thanks for that, thanks for this moment of your life put here. Poetry was never a river to me, I have the impression I've always had to struggle with words to write anything. :)
ReplyDeleteKiss you Sherry!
I am go glad you share.
ReplyDelete"And there began a great unsilencing" Such a moving line. I think for many of us who write poetry we find it to be our salvation.
ReplyDeleteoh, so well done, Sherry ~
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Sherry! Almost always the great unsilencing comes after we get hurt. Pain was such a vital thing to poets, was it not? Smiles.
ReplyDelete- ksm
I love that phrase,' a Great Unsilencing.' How wonderful that that happened.
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