Tuesday, November 18, 2025

ALIVE, ON PLANET EARTH

 

Fabulous wave shot by Geoff Johnson
at UkeeTube

When the Westerly blows,
and waves crash rapturously
upon the shore,
when treetops poke their spires
up through the fog and mist
along the slopes of Wah'nah'juss,
my heart exults in wonder.

When the eagle's piercing cry
echoes across the harbour,
and the heron picky-toes
along the rocky shore
seeking her breakfast,
when dogs with loopy grins
go lolloping in and out
of the waves at Chestermans,
and surfers stand to ride, and fall,
and rise again,

When the morning sun rises
over Lemmens Inlet,
geese flying above in a wavering V,
as the sandpipers whirl and swoop as one
along the water's edge,
and ravens croak their gobble-cry,

When sunset paints the sky
with colours too fantastic to describe
as the big old fiery orb sinks down
below the horizon at day's end,

When just being alive and breathing
in this forever power-place
seems wealth beyond compare,
and I most richly blessed,
thankfulness expands my heart
to bursting, again and again,
so dearly do I cherish the beauty,
the sheer interconnected wonder
of Clayoquot Sound.

How grateful I am
to have walked this earth walk
along its beloved shores,
the song of the waves
forever advancing and retreating
in my heart;
how dearly I feel the blessing,
rich with all life's worth,
just to have another day,
like this,
alive, on planet earth.



Warren Rudd photo

I have posted an earlier poem for Sumana's prompt at What's Going On: What makes you feel most alive? because I could not say it any better than I already have. And for Jennifer at dVerse: a poem based on a poem of Place by Ted Kooser - to write about our own locale.

Truly, where I live abounds in life force, and astounding beauty. Its citizens draw from the powerful energies that surround us. We are blessed. I am forever grateful for my years here.


18 comments:

  1. Ah, you have expressed perfectly the joy you find in being alive in such a beautiful place!! Lovely writing, Sherry.

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  2. What a stunning place to be from sunrise to sunset with the songs of the waves. You are indeed blessed Sherry to walk in this earth. Thank you for joining us at dVerse.

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  3. "how dearly I feel the blessing,
    rich with all life's worth,"

    Luv the wonder and gratitude

    Much♡love

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  4. You are "richly blessed" indeed to live in such beauty, Sherry. I love all the scenes and the sense of wonderment in the garb of gratitude. "geese flying above in a wavering V,"...Beautiful.

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  5. This is amazing and it must be such a blessing to live at such a place... the grandness of it all make me think you live inside the best of every postcard.

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  6. I felt I was there with you, Sherry, listening to the waves ‘crash rapturously upon the shore’, and the eagle's piercing cry. All those birds and sunsets, what a place to live!

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  7. I'm lost for words in admiration and can only say that "my heart exults in wonder." at your poem

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  8. "in this forever power-place" I'm so glad you live there and can feel the power through all of its signs.

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  9. Your appreciation and gratitude for your surroundings is so beautifully expressed here with stunning visuals. I felt I was there...and it was so uplifting.

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  10. wow that is gorgeous I can nearly feel and touch these beautiful moments And love 'the forever power place'

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  11. Oh my goodness, Sherry, I so love this poem. I found myself breathing in deeply and breathing out slowly and contentedly as I read this. You wrote it in such a way that your poem was not just merely words on a screen, but an experience to behold. So exuberant, so peaceful, so wonderful.

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  12. You live in a most gorgeous spot in the World. Beautiful descriptions throughout your poem, Sherry.

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  13. We spent almost half a day at Bouchard Garden, your poem put me there again.

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  14. Oh yes yes yes...so uplifting we are so lucky to live on this wonderful planet. Your place sounds like a paradise of nature.

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  15. This poem builds up to a magnificent ending - I am glad you have a beautiful place to live in and enjoy - Jae

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  16. Looks like a Great Lake. We are thankful for, as I know you are for where you live.

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  17. You live in a beautiful part of the world. Enjoy !

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  18. Your poem and the second picture bring to mind many places in Australia. Power-places as you say. Nicely written 👏

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