Monday, July 21, 2025

Ashes

 


Among the ashes and cinders,
in her faded grey apron,
forsaken, unseen,
by those above-stairs,

she was two hands, serving,
invisible, less-than,
carrying trays, cleaning unobtrusively,
keeping everything orderly,
in its place.

She dare not show a sullen face;
she needed her narrow bed,
her pittance, her weekly half-day off.
In truth, she needed much more than that,
but such was not to be
in 1853.

Yet in that narrow bed, she dared
to dream a better dream:
a vine-covered cottage
of her own, primroses along
a winding garden path, perhaps
someone to share stories and smiles
before the fire on a winter's night,
smoke curling up the chimney,
warm lamplight in the glow.

Not too grand a dream, one as humble as
the dreamer. 
Let's hope life granted her this reward
for her humble demeanor.

for Shay's Word List

3 comments:

  1. Was this poem inspired by anyone in particular, or is she any woman and everywoman who is relegated to the background? In any event, a very interesting portrait, Sherry.

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  2. Any woman of "her station" at the time. Not that we have come very far, slipping backwards as we are.

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  3. What an immersive and beautifully composed prose poem - I love your perspective and natural flow of story telling - Jae

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