Monday, April 21, 2025

THIS POEM IS A BIG RED HEART

 


Phoenix


Sebastian

This poem is a six year old boy
whose dad and dog both died.
This poem is a crayon.
This poem is a big red heart.

This poem is a sweet and valiant little boy,
who has known tears, but who loves to smile.
This poem gets knocked down, and
bounces back up again.
Like the boomerang, it keeps coming back,
because it has known death, so it cherishes life.
This poem is a six year old boy
whose dad and dog both died.

This poem is a crayon held in a grubby fist
by an intent little boy
who wants a picture of his pain.
This poem can draw a stick figure dad
with a big smile, and open arms,
and a devoted droopy-eyed dog,
with floppy ears and an old soul.
This poem is a crayon.

This poem is a gigantic wobbly red heart
with a dog inside, along with the words
"Papa and Phoenix are fishin' in hevven".
This poem squeezes the heart
of his mother, who lost her mate,
then, one year later, held the furry body
of his old fishing pal as he went to sleep
for the very last time.

This poem has lost too many loves,
but keeps on smiling, loving and moving forward,
because of a small boy made almost entirely
of hope and trust and sweetness and love.
This poem is a big red heart.


for my prompt at What's Going On: a choice of either "This poem is...." or Hannah's Boomerang Metaphor form.

My heart is even sadder than it was when I first wrote this poem. Because Sebastian, the small boy in the photo and in this poem, with whom I spent time in his early childhood years, died last August in a boating accident, at age fifteen. Now he AND his Papa and Phoenix are all in "hevven" together. This world brings lots of people (and dogs) to love - but also, lots of losses.

16 comments:

  1. It is so sad when one things about the losses one has experienced in life. Sebastian sounds like a special boy who had many losses himself before he was taken from this world way too young! I love the ending: "This poem is a big red heart."

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  2. Oh dear... devastating that the boy passed away too...I can't begin to imagine the extent of the woman's loss: son and husband and dog. The poem is so tender - with its red heart and crayon and words and love.

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  3. Oh this poem is so terribly sad. You know when there is so much sadness it becomes overwhelming and difficult to find words. Beautiful.

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  4. Thank you for sharing this. Hard to read without shedding a tear for losses.

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  5. This is so heartbreaking Sherry. I don't know why I feel like I have heard about Sebastian from you when he was a kid. Feeling like a personal loss. Your words are so full of love.

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  6. The crayon is a strong metaphor that speaks to both innocence lost and overcoming. This true tale shows how cruel life can be and how death is a hair's breadth away no matter how wretchedly unfair.

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  7. "it has known death, so it cherishes life"--heart-breaking to know he is dead, he so alive and wise for a boy of six. Even without knowing that Sebastian died at 15, the poem is moving. The boy lives in this poem, the boy is a poem. Wow.

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  8. A lovely, poignant tribute to poetry and to the six year old boy, Sherry. I love the thought of a poem as a big red heart.

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  9. A poem as a big red heart - a wonderful way to express complex emotions and the power of the human spirit. Suzanne - Wayfaring - Wordpress

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  10. Beautiful moving tribute to a boy who experienced such loss, and now my heart breaks at knowing the little boy is no longer with us.

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  11. A wonderful tribute, Sherry. And thank you for the prompt.

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  12. Oh, wow. This poem squeezed my heart, too. I love it all, especially, "This poem gets knocked down, and
    bounces back up again." Yes. I am so sorry for your loss, too.

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  13. This poem pulls at the heartstrings.

    This poem is a big red heart. yes, indeed it is....beautiful

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  14. What a wonderful commemoration of Sebastian and Phoenix - the repetition really made for an impactful read - Jae

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  15. Oh this poem touches me deeply It's so moving. Too much for such a little boy with the same name as my grandchild. A big hug for Sebastian

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  16. Sebastian really got to me. So much loss in such a young life. Beautifully done,
    Sherry.

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