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Tuesday, November 12, 2024

OF YOU, IN MEMORY


Of you, in memory, I dream
summer days that did not end -
the coo of doves at daybreak,
blue sky over your shoulder,
your dark eyes looking down; a smile,
my heart open wide with wonder.
My summer of love
had arrived.

Of you, in memory, I sing
the song of a distant heart
that dared not open,
from whom I unwillingly
but inevitably had to part.

ploughing the garden under,
along with all my hopes

Of you, in memory, I recall
the coo of doves at daybreak,
how you opened
the door of the cage
and out she (we) flew.

No answer is an answer
to the questions of the heart

Of you, in memory, I sing
every time I hear
the dove’s soft coo.

we ploughed the garden under,
along with all my hopes

Of you, in memory, I wonder,
sifting through all
I have come to know today:
what would have happened
had I been brave enough
and whole enough
to stay?

But no answer was your answer
to the questions of my heart
and so unwillingly but inevitably,
the time came for us to part.


My attempt at a fugue. A fugue, like the fugue in music, repeats a refrain or a theme throughout the poem.

Only one year, and one summer of love this lifetime. Too short. But fourteen years of love with Pup more than made up for it.


10 comments:

  1. No answer is an answer to the questions of the heart... oh wow...a perfect line and says it all...we all hoard those bittersweet memories, I think.....

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  2. This is such a beautiful memory, Sherry. I am glad you had this one summer of love that that you have the memory to look back on. True, we never know what would have happened if.....but one can speculate in one's dreams. Nice form too! Impressive.

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  3. "Of you, in memory, I recall
    the coo of doves at daybreak,
    how you opened
    the door . . ."
    The fugue! A beautiful form for how memory works, moving deeper and deeper. Your poem is sad, but also glorious, that such moments happened with an open door.

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  4. I love how you have undertaken this form - and it is really effective in recalling that certain memory that slips us by - Jae

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  5. How such rich memories pull at heartstrings! I love the refrain so delicately woven. The form is perfect for the poem.

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  6. A beautiful fugue, Rosemary, such happy memories and so poignant!

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  7. I feel your longing for times past - the fugue is a perfect form for such memories. Wondering what could have happened if life had been otherwise... Suzanne _ Wayfaring blog - Wordpress

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  8. Such bittersweet memories, so beautifully written.

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  9. I love the form you have written, it made me read it again and again, there is a music to it...poignant!

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  10. This is no "attempt", this is pure poetry, Sherry. heart breaking but beautiful just the same. The two are not opposites.

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