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Wednesday, July 10, 2019

BIRD WEATHER



She blew in on the Northerly,
and perched like a raven
in the corner of his heart.
With his blackbird soul,
his wings folded up across his chest
for protection,
he tried to shoo her off.
But the way she stayed
spoke to him,
and he dared to try again.

There were storms.
There are always storms.
But then the weather would clear.
The sunny days would lull them
for a time.

He was dark and craggy,
as beautiful and weathered
as an old mountain,
feet in the clay, head in the clouds,
his heart a wide expanse of yearning
for high skies,
though his wings could not remember
how to fly.
  
She was ephemeral as 
early morning mist,
along the mountain's shoulders.
The nature of vapour is 
tentative;
it has a tendency
to slip away.

There was heartbreak.
There is always heartbreak,
two souls too frightened to trust
what they had found.
She flew out
on the Westerly,
headed for the sea.

In old age,
she remembers
how the doves cooed at dawn,
a glimpse of blue sky over his shoulder
on the rooftop
on summer afternoons.

The weather of love
is so changeable.
It requires more faith
than injured hearts can give.


for Sumana's prompt at Midweek Motif: Weather. This is a new poem, re-worked from an old one. Right now, after a very long dry winter and spring, with our rainforest drying up, we are finally getting some rain, to our great relief.

17 comments:

  1. Wish there weren't any heartbreak or wounded hearts. It's nice she had strong wings to be in another sky. The longing so touches.

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  2. I know from experience how hard it is to love again after having my heart injured.

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  3. This is one of the most exquisite poems I have ever read, Sherry!💖 Especially love the wisdom in "The weather of love is so changeable. It requires more faith than injured hearts can give." Oh yes!😊

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  4. So wise...."The weather of love is so changeable. It requires more faith than injured hearts can give." So sadly true in many cases. Such a poem of love and weather...my.

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  5. Oh Sherry, I love this. The inevitability of being alone is so strong here.

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  6. Glad you're finally getting rain.
    Your poem is so touching, so sensitive. I love it, even its sadness.

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  7. I have found this to be the truth in my life, which is why I get so angry when people say things like "oh, you should just try again, you should risk heartbreak again." That isn't for them to say. I've had enough of it.

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  8. How beautifully you wrote this Sherry, such calm observation and touching words.

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  9. There is always heartbreak and sometimes it is hard to forget yet one moves on with each new day.

    Hopefully, a bit of rain will come tonight to break the heatwave.

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  10. Beautiful imagery and empathy. "his heart a wide expanse of yearning for high skies". May we have the courage to expand and embrace our yearning. Thank you, Sherry!

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  11. OMG your last verse just blew me away!!!

    Happy you dropped by to read mine

    Much❤🕊❤love

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  12. Beautiful images
    She was ephemeral as
    early morning mist,
    along the mountain's shoulders.
    The nature of vapour is
    tentative;
    it has a tendency
    to slip away.
    This stanza is gorgeous Love it
    and then the deep wisdom in the last stanza
    Very beautiful poem Love it

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  13. Love the play of words in the title. Your beautiful poem is so layered, I can peel it so many times and find a new meaning. Brilliant write, Sherry.

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  14. "Beautiful and weathered like an old mountain" Loved this idea. How mountains seem so immoveable and yet change slowly over time, with the effects of the wind and she's the one that blows in.

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  15. I enjoyed the bird imagery, Sherry, especially:
    ‘She blew in on the Northerly,
    and perched like a raven
    in the corner of his heart’
    and the image of the old mountain ‘feet in the clay, head in the clouds’.
    The final lines are so true.

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  16. Today faith leaders from every corner of the world are connecting the dots between our heads and our hearts ...we don’t want any more injured hearts.
    What a beautiful poem. I loved it, Sherry.

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  17. Love the last stanza Sherry! Those are powerful strong words, very clever indeed. It is philosophically strong!

    Hank

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