Raven, by Sue Coleman
Raven,
lift me up on your black wing,
because I'm floundering here,
in this boggy morass
of Must-Do's.
I want to soar mountaintops,
swoop over rivers,
sit in the crook of the tallest cedar
on the planet
and survey the morning.
Send me a great gray space
with nothing in it,
that I might contemplate vastness,
letting go of the particular.
Invite me with your bent wing,
and I will follow.
Send me your gobble-cry
and I will sing it back to you,
as you ride the thermals,
I, land-locked,
and envious
of your
lack of tethers.
Lift me up on your black wing
and take me home,
where the winter waves
pound against the dunes,
where I can plant my feet
on the sandy shore,
and be homesick
no more.
Hopefully you will soon have a bit more 'gray space' of your own again soon! Hopefully the vast is on the horizon. Nice thoughts here, Sherry!
ReplyDeleteLovely images...if we could only fly....
ReplyDeleteOh Sherry this is absolutely stunning the third stanza in particular moved me. Amazing work
ReplyDeleteI'm breathless, speechless. This plea has power. Hold on there, girl.
ReplyDeletestunning piece ... we all need that space.. or need to fly to where we need to be...
ReplyDeleteHow wonderful it would be to fly, to see the way they see. Beautiful poem.
ReplyDeletei can so relate...i am drowning in must do's and its killing my ability to fly....
ReplyDeletei hope you get that flight back home soon enough you know....smiles...swinging through early on the pantry run...smiles.
Deleteadd my caw to the cause, Sherry, to speed you on your way home ~
ReplyDeleteSherry, the second stanza really reached out
ReplyDeleteto me..I too want to soar mountaintops..what
a feeling of elation that would be..thinking of
you and your journey home..
beautiful lines.....hope you soar above those killing must do's and find your own 'gray space' very soon...
ReplyDeleteThis one is really powerful!!
ReplyDeletekeep singing this song like a mantra, mi amiga, and soon their will be a metamorphosis where it will be your eyes overseeing upon the great expanse rather than the prarticular. you will sit upon a grand promontory over the sea watching the osprey play and the waves rising to cooling sprinkles upon your face and Tofino being that place.
ReplyDeletewonderful. gracias
Commenting on this a second time, Sherry. Indeed there are so many must-do's in life that sometimes get in the way of what we would LIKE to do. I think we all yearn for that gray space sometime!!
ReplyDeleteI can feel the yearning in your words, Sherry! We all have times when we'd like a raven to carry us on its back so we can be homesick no more. I hope you eventually find your own.
ReplyDeletepefrect! as gabriella said, you can feel the yearning, the urge.. beautiful.
ReplyDeleteOne needs space to know more. If only one can fly like them and be back. Great write Sherry!
ReplyDeleteHank
Ah reading this beautiful one again.....I love this Ravensong...these are the words of every soul waiting for that great lift...
ReplyDeleteOh Sherry - you can hear your voice in this one shining through - you will be at the sea soon - you are at the sea now - the waves are part of you pounding in your pulse dancing in each lyric you write - you are the sea - it has never left you although you long for it <3
ReplyDeleteSomehow you must get to live at the beach....keep on!
ReplyDeleteThe meditation of your words is beautiful. To reach out for the domain where you can contemplate and silently wonder about the intricacies of living and life would be a bliss. May we all reach that point. :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done.
-HA
your poems never fail me with their metaphorical, environmental, and wise themes. They make me think and sigh.
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful poem Sherry ~ I specially like this part: envious of your lack of tethers and the whole last stanza ~
ReplyDeleteAs Mary said, sometimes we all yearn for 'that gray space'....Sherry! ...I would also love to fly on this raven's back ...there's a lot to uncover its secrets!! Smiles...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words, great images you created, Sherry. Lovely~
yes, the 'must-dos' are taking way too much time lately...
ReplyDeleteAw..Sherry! How powerfully sounds your wish! Good intention! Keep it up! I believe your dream'll come true soon :)xx
ReplyDeleteI hope the 'raven' listens to your plea. May you be by your beloved beach very, very soon. Home awaits.
ReplyDeleteAh a wonderful use of the raven. Such a maligned yet majestic creature.
ReplyDeleteOh Sherry, this is gorgeous, riveting. I love this poem. Bookmarked for rereading.
ReplyDeleteThe must do's are always with us. I like your prayer and raven wings are strong and swift. I think you have hit on a Universal longing we all recognize. Thank you, my friend,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
We all need a space ..of our own..where we feel contended and happy..so nicely written Sherry... loved it... :-)
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ReplyDeleteI want to soar mountaintops,
swoop over rivers,
sit in the crook of the tallest cedar
on the planet
and survey the morning.
I think everyone of us has such a dream to be at peace with ourselves.
Flying.... its such a pleasure... it can make anyone jealous.. it gives the feeling of freedom...
ReplyDeleteThere are lovely strong images of contrast in the earth-bound and the sky-free. i wonder if the longing is reciprocal
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping in at my blog
Have a nice week
much love...
Dear Raven, consider me as well... Nice one Sherry!
ReplyDeleteYour kinship with the bird is palpable in these verses, Sherry. This really is a longing cry for freedom, very affecting.
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