You glide past my window
serene and purposeful
as a schooner
in full billowing sail
upon a celestial sea
For Izy's prompt at Real Toads, in which we must write about the moon without using the words night or sky. Not sure if I got this right. Likely too obvious.
That is a gorgeous comparison, Sherry.. celestial sea..Perfect!
ReplyDeleteI think it's perfect, Sherry!
ReplyDeleteSmooth! :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful image, Sherry, a schooner in full sail. Makes me homesick again. Hug a wave for me, please.
ReplyDeleteLuv, K
yup you nailed it sherry
ReplyDeleteWonderful description of moon without mention of night or sky. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteOh Sherry, this poem delighted me ... my father used to say 'once in a blue moon' all the time ......
ReplyDeletePerfect!! Absolutely love your image here, Sherry...as Kerry said...perfect comparison! :)
ReplyDelete!! Wow - short, sweet, stunning! A schooner (LOVE it)
ReplyDeleteAgain, you provide images of power!
ReplyDeleteperfect and powerful ... How I love reading your verse, dear Sherry!:)
ReplyDeleteThat beautiful ship....lovely poem
ReplyDeletei love it.
ReplyDeleteI could see it passing
ReplyDeleteSherry,this is gorgeous. Well done, my friend. I really enjoy the relationship your narrator has to the moon, it's serene and calming. Way to go!!!
ReplyDeleteIt's bang on...and a good one too :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful perfection, Sherry!
ReplyDeleteI looked outside my window the other night - through the tres and there was your lovely moon.
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