tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post9078348107264861297..comments2024-03-28T02:58:45.347-07:00Comments on STARDREAMING With Sherry Blue Sky: This Poem is a Steam TrainSherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-62335331079125078432014-06-26T13:13:37.972-07:002014-06-26T13:13:37.972-07:00this poet is a bag of manure, these days, but hope...this poet is a bag of manure, these days, but hopefully something will eventually grow :) ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-55546517616648981612014-06-20T16:00:16.327-07:002014-06-20T16:00:16.327-07:00I love this super new form! I may give it a try o...I love this super new form! I may give it a try one of these days!Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-32426577423999399512014-06-18T15:17:21.653-07:002014-06-18T15:17:21.653-07:00Greatly expressive write! I like the energy sugges...Greatly expressive write! I like the energy suggested by this steam train and I, too, think the closing stanza is perfect. Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-52424968407513683702014-06-17T09:55:11.935-07:002014-06-17T09:55:11.935-07:00Thank you SO much for sharing the form Sherry and ...Thank you SO much for sharing the form Sherry and for being inspired to write by it! <br /><br />I love the progression of your poem and what a perfect, perfect ending!! Excellent!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-24711700435949401822014-06-17T09:54:13.391-07:002014-06-17T09:54:13.391-07:00Thank you, Sumana!!Thank you, Sumana!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-85158845825318645812014-06-17T09:53:17.857-07:002014-06-17T09:53:17.857-07:00Debi!! Thank you so much! I agree about Sherry'...Debi!! Thank you so much! I agree about Sherry's poem too and I think your poems have done just this...I'm always moved by your work. <br />Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-72896268506382160662014-06-17T03:45:28.314-07:002014-06-17T03:45:28.314-07:00I must have picked up on all these travel vibes, f...I must have picked up on all these travel vibes, for this morning, I wrote <a href="http://havantaclue.blogspot.co.uk/2014/06/no-travel-involved.html" rel="nofollow">THIS</a><br />I love your train that takes us home. LOLJinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-88357951768238125932014-06-17T02:00:26.608-07:002014-06-17T02:00:26.608-07:00love this train ride.. :) and Hannah's idea of...love this train ride.. :) and Hannah's idea of this new form is brilliant...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-67147283497862831102014-06-16T23:24:56.094-07:002014-06-16T23:24:56.094-07:00Would love to hop on this train every single day!Would love to hop on this train every single day!Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-41185855273596792652014-06-16T21:06:40.491-07:002014-06-16T21:06:40.491-07:00I love this form and idea! Yours is done so well ...I love this form and idea! Yours is done so well and the idea of traveling and seeing the word-yes, that is what we poets do...even if it is in our back yards~ Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-91233375414535259132014-06-16T19:19:49.671-07:002014-06-16T19:19:49.671-07:00Trains are a trap of the mind, they carry us away ...Trains are a trap of the mind, they carry us away in dreaming just like a good poem will.<br />One thing that brings me back to earth is that a train is leashed, tied to the rails on which it has to go. Mechanically a poem should bundled up, every line and word should fit the poem's purpose and theme.<br />But those rails? I crave a bit more freedom. <br />How about a motorcycle? Or a riding horse?<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-83959008273443931452014-06-16T14:31:18.127-07:002014-06-16T14:31:18.127-07:00Love the new form, Sherry; and will definitely be ...Love the new form, Sherry; and will definitely be checking back mid July.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-77941967682724003672014-06-16T13:11:17.669-07:002014-06-16T13:11:17.669-07:00oooh, very cool! love it. *runs off to Hannah'...oooh, very cool! love it. *runs off to Hannah's blog*Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-80745083698985163332014-06-16T12:43:58.454-07:002014-06-16T12:43:58.454-07:00Sometimes that is just what I wish a poem could be...Sometimes that is just what I wish a poem could be.. a journey .. bringing home.. which I think you did.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-52280418490957332572014-06-16T10:05:42.074-07:002014-06-16T10:05:42.074-07:00Ohhhhhhhh .. I am all stoked up and ready to try t...Ohhhhhhhh .. I am all stoked up and ready to try this! Super write, Sherry!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-62865004252360229982014-06-16T09:59:54.691-07:002014-06-16T09:59:54.691-07:00It's a lovely way to get started both into wri...It's a lovely way to get started both into writing and reading a poem, and in your case, it's an especially lovely way to close it. Thanks, Sherry. K. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-27447042311850101222014-06-16T09:52:29.635-07:002014-06-16T09:52:29.635-07:00I love Hannah's "This poem is" poems...I love Hannah's "This poem is" poems. She is a very talented lady. <br />Your poem is a prayer and I hope that my poems someday will find its voice to take us home.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-16650797162123731972014-06-16T09:31:08.787-07:002014-06-16T09:31:08.787-07:00What a great way to begin a poem! I love your meta...What a great way to begin a poem! I love your metaphor. Cool poem, SherryKerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-30325641892761025612014-06-16T09:10:31.448-07:002014-06-16T09:10:31.448-07:00Steam train implies so much power. I like it and ...Steam train implies so much power. I like it and like how it brings the poem and reader home!<br />Did you know that Amtrak is awarding residencies for writers on train cars? I think, though, they want to own the new writings.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-42360229775294740542014-06-16T09:09:36.477-07:002014-06-16T09:09:36.477-07:00it is a cool series by hannah...i think it would b...it is a cool series by hannah...i think it would be really cool to ride the rails and feel their rhythm again.....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com