tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post882043039627996233..comments2024-03-28T16:45:37.621-07:00Comments on STARDREAMING With Sherry Blue Sky: Night in the Black ForestSherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-29534615559416718092014-05-20T00:21:10.672-07:002014-05-20T00:21:10.672-07:00I loved the picture you painted with your words Sh...I loved the picture you painted with your words Sherry, it is so vivid and beautiful. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04848244926697218980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-143117202271750432014-05-19T09:17:54.540-07:002014-05-19T09:17:54.540-07:00Canine and wilderness . . . with a touch of edgine...Canine and wilderness . . . with a touch of edginess . . . It's definitely you, Sherry. Stormcat Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-43132323649257435662014-05-19T05:58:03.494-07:002014-05-19T05:58:03.494-07:00This is wonderful! Just enough and enough space…....This is wonderful! Just enough and enough space….annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-17639906381818097912014-05-19T03:03:11.589-07:002014-05-19T03:03:11.589-07:00A story conveyed poetically...
Good one!A story conveyed poetically...<br />Good one!Locomentehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16891335111277665181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-83206338811198122992014-05-18T21:28:04.100-07:002014-05-18T21:28:04.100-07:00The image portrayed is so vivid...the deep forest ...The image portrayed is so vivid...the deep forest and the atmosphere.. I love the poetic form too.. :-)Maniparnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16109166826609932168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-23776002478935038982014-05-18T18:27:05.201-07:002014-05-18T18:27:05.201-07:00I felt my heart beat a bit faster as I read your p...I felt my heart beat a bit faster as I read your poem the feeling of darkness but, somehow finding comfort in a friend. Interesting form as well. I always enjoy reading your work.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-26922145775780508362014-05-18T10:36:40.310-07:002014-05-18T10:36:40.310-07:00I took this as almost symbolic...the dark forest, ...I took this as almost symbolic...the dark forest, the dread, a dark and uneasy time...to having a faithful companion, to "lean" on...and to find safety and comfort together. Great work with this form Sherry.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-40955406549513883052014-05-18T09:56:45.628-07:002014-05-18T09:56:45.628-07:00Feel the intense of the line 'The night draws ...Feel the intense of the line 'The night draws close. The forest fills with dread.' and like the relief sounds 'Paws pad beside me, faithful, guardian.' ~ very effective form.humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-89112894600977263672014-05-18T09:43:32.185-07:002014-05-18T09:43:32.185-07:00I love pantoums. Well done Sherry!I love pantoums. Well done Sherry!rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-12787290468589992212014-05-18T07:27:19.669-07:002014-05-18T07:27:19.669-07:00it draws you near.it draws you near.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-58411520919069872412014-05-18T07:20:38.542-07:002014-05-18T07:20:38.542-07:00A poem where one's senses awaken. Spectacular!...A poem where one's senses awaken. Spectacular! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-28185612504985115502014-05-18T07:17:59.744-07:002014-05-18T07:17:59.744-07:00Good grief Sherry! Run! :-)
Well written.
ZQGood grief Sherry! Run! :-)<br />Well written.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-31017821059843422862014-05-18T06:50:22.798-07:002014-05-18T06:50:22.798-07:00Very vivid imagery.Very vivid imagery.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-41220880967345778072014-05-18T06:49:44.850-07:002014-05-18T06:49:44.850-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-21146035268961870662014-05-18T05:50:57.782-07:002014-05-18T05:50:57.782-07:00Very fine use of this form. Wonderful message as ...Very fine use of this form. Wonderful message as well--that we all have a need not to be alone in facing the darkness.<br />Steve K.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-61107148511495407942014-05-18T01:24:58.003-07:002014-05-18T01:24:58.003-07:00You have conveyed the atmosphere of some forests v...You have conveyed the atmosphere of some forests very convincingly. I too would go there with a dog. Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-22525295372915044072014-05-18T00:47:54.226-07:002014-05-18T00:47:54.226-07:00no fun to be alone in a dark forest and it's g...no fun to be alone in a dark forest and it's good to know there's someone walking next to you... a comforting feelClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-25688387122561383432014-05-18T00:15:04.122-07:002014-05-18T00:15:04.122-07:00Gosh Sherry - I really do love this - everything a...Gosh Sherry - I really do love this - everything about it from form to content - to the gentle comforting feeling that I get that now allows me to get up and go to bed - feeling safe and sheltered :) Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-1388654129711707502014-05-17T18:18:58.359-07:002014-05-17T18:18:58.359-07:00A pantoum is so hard and you've risen to the c... A pantoum is so hard and you've risen to the challenge beautifully--really well done, Sherry--thanks. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-30664862526933027732014-05-17T15:21:29.893-07:002014-05-17T15:21:29.893-07:00This poem is an adventurous one!!! Love all the w...This poem is an adventurous one!!! Love all the wet, looking for shelter, forest action. When I was little I'd go out into the rain and climb up a mountain behind my former home in Pago Pago and just sing in the rain. This poem makes me reminisce...thanks for that Sherry.Nicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-10878136099742458682014-05-17T11:21:26.743-07:002014-05-17T11:21:26.743-07:00I love the shivers this piece gave me, a very Tolk...I love the shivers this piece gave me, a very Tolkien feel to it especially the scary forests! I love love love the wolf element as well... :)Anne Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00741540499289419526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-31769303988293877182014-05-17T09:58:09.182-07:002014-05-17T09:58:09.182-07:00A lovely form & perfect for a night in black f...A lovely form & perfect for a night in black forest with the faithful guardian ~<br /><br />Happy long weekend Sherry~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-40670304847160168192014-05-17T05:17:32.888-07:002014-05-17T05:17:32.888-07:00ah the repetition works really well...i hear your ...ah the repetition works really well...i hear your friend in th paws padding as well...cool piece...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-61960958720840893512014-05-16T21:49:31.443-07:002014-05-16T21:49:31.443-07:00The lovely nature in its glory:)The lovely nature in its glory:)Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-70364442754969584272014-05-16T21:14:05.962-07:002014-05-16T21:14:05.962-07:00"Paws pad beside me, faithful, guardian"..."Paws pad beside me, faithful, guardian"...the line brings so much relief in the dark, foreboding night<br />....beautifully worded poem....Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.com