tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post8204556667550146263..comments2024-03-28T12:12:43.989-07:00Comments on STARDREAMING With Sherry Blue Sky: The Light Shines Through My Broken PlacesSherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-62405791714793395162012-10-17T07:23:42.832-07:002012-10-17T07:23:42.832-07:00Sherry your words are just magical...this could be...Sherry your words are just magical...this could be my favorite of yours!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-64639130163954344762012-10-17T05:30:02.073-07:002012-10-17T05:30:02.073-07:00Im so glad I joined poets united...Every week I ge...Im so glad I joined poets united...Every week I get to read such great works.lovely poem.asteria's canvasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02408565009305995259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-32286674703077724132012-10-16T14:48:10.770-07:002012-10-16T14:48:10.770-07:00I love what you wrote and how brave you were~ Thi...I love what you wrote and how brave you were~ This was wonderful and shows just how wild spirited you truly are~ ((hugs))Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-17899147645476035462012-10-15T22:41:52.188-07:002012-10-15T22:41:52.188-07:00So powerful and intense. Well done!So powerful and intense. Well done!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-82567228736668868452012-10-15T18:34:42.804-07:002012-10-15T18:34:42.804-07:00Such a graceful dance this form is for you...the l...Such a graceful dance this form is for you...the lines you weaved back through are so emotive. This is beautifully written, Sherry!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-15512329874533826892012-10-15T14:37:51.390-07:002012-10-15T14:37:51.390-07:00Just an extraordinary piece Sherry--beautiful writ...Just an extraordinary piece Sherry--beautiful writeAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-91035599910673628162012-10-15T10:21:51.132-07:002012-10-15T10:21:51.132-07:00Applause....what a beautiful piece, Sherry!Never k...Applause....what a beautiful piece, Sherry!Never knew that pantoum could flow so effortlessly...Want to try my hands on this some time :) <br />Wonderful...wonderful piece of poetry!Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-19663972377825496532012-10-15T07:08:26.308-07:002012-10-15T07:08:26.308-07:00This is beautiful Sherry. How wonderful to find y...This is beautiful Sherry. How wonderful to find yourself. There are many things that look like love, but finally you found the real thing in you. <br /><br />(Hope you had a nice weekend.)Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-58653704043707777912012-10-15T04:32:18.584-07:002012-10-15T04:32:18.584-07:00Wonderful! Great subject for a pantoum given the ...Wonderful! Great subject for a pantoum given the way that form revolves and evolves. Works just perfectly. And your pantoum flows so smoothly. Perfect for the Outlaws too! Great job. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-9305116844148901692012-10-15T04:12:34.914-07:002012-10-15T04:12:34.914-07:00I love that the light shines through, and I'm ...I love that the light shines through, and I'm sure though broken, you know as much about mending and healing. After all, if we are to go on, the breaking allows us to learn about the healing. I love this.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-27514727564367319282012-10-15T03:53:28.845-07:002012-10-15T03:53:28.845-07:00I have to join the praise above: Awesome commitmen...I have to join the praise above: Awesome commitment to form!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-85875835649183427772012-10-15T01:09:24.379-07:002012-10-15T01:09:24.379-07:00What beautiful sunrise! And what a beautiful panto...What beautiful sunrise! And what a beautiful pantoum from a beautiful lady.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-2807225067875381822012-10-15T01:01:25.334-07:002012-10-15T01:01:25.334-07:00You took on the biggie [pantoum] and created a bea...You took on the biggie [pantoum] and created a beauty. 'brokenness', 'heart honed', 'fashioned from rubble', 'forged from pain'<br />every phrase a winner. Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-81568775421216847002012-10-14T19:39:27.127-07:002012-10-14T19:39:27.127-07:00Beautiful pantoum, Sherry! We have a similar form ...Beautiful pantoum, Sherry! We have a similar form which we call 'pantun' with an a b a b rhyme. The last two lines are the advice, challenges or statements. The first two provide the rhymes and may not have any connection to the last two.Nicely!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-15893527986382031312012-10-14T19:23:18.072-07:002012-10-14T19:23:18.072-07:00Beautifully written and ultimately so hopeful! I ...Beautifully written and ultimately so hopeful! I really enjoyed this.Barbarahttp://barbarathehealthynut.blogspot.com/2012/10/perhaps-wind-knows.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-56005957666451262762012-10-14T17:59:53.334-07:002012-10-14T17:59:53.334-07:00You picked a perfect form for this Sherry! You bu...You picked a perfect form for this Sherry! You built a lovely crescendo, from the pieces to the whole. Really enjoyed this :-)Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-79816246779447672172012-10-14T17:57:42.189-07:002012-10-14T17:57:42.189-07:00Gorgeous Sherry!! I can so relate to this. I'm...Gorgeous Sherry!! I can so relate to this. I'm thankful the light never ceases to shine.Laura Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-7130164928719298692012-10-14T16:07:28.776-07:002012-10-14T16:07:28.776-07:00I love the pantoum form and you used it so well!I love the pantoum form and you used it so well!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14000820772202105961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-82256677953228208892012-10-14T15:18:39.571-07:002012-10-14T15:18:39.571-07:00Wow.....frankly, you had me with that brilliant fi...Wow.....frankly, you had me with that brilliant first line.<br />(no pun intended!)Melhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14408403855260279799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-15153946221870285402012-10-14T13:13:29.665-07:002012-10-14T13:13:29.665-07:00Beautiful pantoum Sherry ~ I like the renewal of ...Beautiful pantoum Sherry ~ I like the renewal of being new again ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-76589826723148268052012-10-14T12:08:20.955-07:002012-10-14T12:08:20.955-07:00excellent use of the form. and as full of wisdom a...excellent use of the form. and as full of wisdom as ever.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-25976701705347655132012-10-14T11:05:07.784-07:002012-10-14T11:05:07.784-07:00Sherry,
A most beautiful set of words, in any poe...Sherry,<br /><br />A most beautiful set of words, in any poetic form...heartfelt and meaningful. Loves won and lost; together with the rebirth of wisdom.<br /><br />Happy Autumnal Sunday Sherry,<br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-37802903722032821162012-10-14T10:19:19.433-07:002012-10-14T10:19:19.433-07:00Sherry! What a fantastic use of the form, and phra...Sherry! What a fantastic use of the form, and phrase. "Light shines through my brokenness in sweet relief." <br />Oh, yes. De Jackson (WhimsyGizmo)http://www.whimsygizmo.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-44902153412510794482012-10-14T06:52:52.549-07:002012-10-14T06:52:52.549-07:00nice one..thanks for sharing..
Feel free to visit ...nice one..thanks for sharing..<br />Feel free to visit and follow our fishing blog in Borneo at http://www.kakinginti.rumahpanjai.com<br /> Cheers!!!BorneoAnglerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04863500720636176682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-25432688279681447942012-10-14T00:05:52.749-07:002012-10-14T00:05:52.749-07:00lovely lovely lovely!!!
"I rose from ashes,...lovely lovely lovely!!!<br /><br />"I rose from ashes, was made new again"<br /><br />*sigh* i can relate to this...Bing Yaphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01562123246667338670noreply@blogger.com