tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post7474509182865103815..comments2024-03-28T06:12:51.470-07:00Comments on STARDREAMING With Sherry Blue Sky: The Trellis GateSherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-23505396711989982052013-01-25T09:37:09.677-08:002013-01-25T09:37:09.677-08:00Sherry,
Your poem brought me right back to happy,...Sherry,<br /><br />Your poem brought me right back to happy, carefree childhood days spent at my grandmother's house in the Northern Ireland countryside. Long summer evenings enjoying time away fromn the regular confinement of city living...<br /><br /><br />Eileen<br /><br />Thank you for visiting my Blogs Sherry. I have just retuned from France and catching-up with routine here at home:)Eileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-69161221022785239322013-01-24T20:41:56.890-08:002013-01-24T20:41:56.890-08:00Please check your inbox, Sherry. I sent one mail y...Please check your inbox, Sherry. I sent one mail yesterday and re sending it once again...:)Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-79716266091920600792013-01-24T18:16:47.866-08:002013-01-24T18:16:47.866-08:00Gosh. I can imagine you on the gate waiting and r...Gosh. I can imagine you on the gate waiting and returning there again and again. A gate! How symbollic! But it is swinging and not locking the narrator here or there. It makes me wonder what Grandmother was like that the narator had to wait for the invitation.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-32821385048499145192013-01-24T11:17:36.328-08:002013-01-24T11:17:36.328-08:00It's always so interesting when we think back ...It's always so interesting when we think back to our childhood. The way we remember the event and the way it really happened often differ!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-35372019912415717242013-01-24T09:39:37.187-08:002013-01-24T09:39:37.187-08:00Love this narrative poem, takes me back to my own ...Love this narrative poem, takes me back to my own childhood when I spent summers with my grandparents. Lovely poem!Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-76263350239971953522013-01-24T08:16:41.279-08:002013-01-24T08:16:41.279-08:00Lovely....'invisible child'...!...aha, you...Lovely....'invisible child'...!...aha, you've been a poet from the very beginning. I loved those childhood memories...esp, swinging on the trellis gate!!:)<br />Beautiful... Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-31398503024655900432013-01-24T03:35:39.025-08:002013-01-24T03:35:39.025-08:00You took us right to that place, Sherry. Thank goo...You took us right to that place, Sherry. Thank goodness for your grandparents.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-34849389860828284602013-01-23T22:33:20.087-08:002013-01-23T22:33:20.087-08:00great narrative. i found it very poignant as well...great narrative. i found it very poignant as well :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-14779647949672967552013-01-23T18:16:12.335-08:002013-01-23T18:16:12.335-08:00Beautifully written, Sherry, and so poignant. In s...Beautifully written, Sherry, and so poignant. In some ways, I was that little girl, too.<br />Luv, KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-45692306088265013162013-01-23T14:28:45.403-08:002013-01-23T14:28:45.403-08:00I think this is a wonderful poem, Sherry. You took...I think this is a wonderful poem, Sherry. You took me right into your experience with simple, telling words.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-24503720027616872532013-01-23T14:25:38.475-08:002013-01-23T14:25:38.475-08:00This has such a dream like quality to it--and I fe...This has such a dream like quality to it--and I felt your little girl so clearly--wonderful piece!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-10874738513555264772013-01-23T13:02:38.091-08:002013-01-23T13:02:38.091-08:00I see that little girl. You have painted quite a p...I see that little girl. You have painted quite a picture, a scene most of us would love to inhabit, if just for a time.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-54985575714701182602013-01-23T13:02:37.487-08:002013-01-23T13:02:37.487-08:00I see that little girl. You have painted quite a p...I see that little girl. You have painted quite a picture, a scene most of us would love to inhabit, if just for a time.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-78791992977113891132013-01-23T12:44:09.400-08:002013-01-23T12:44:09.400-08:00Great portrayal of that riding the fence feeling. ...Great portrayal of that riding the fence feeling. I fear children must do it more than others. The need for safety may keep us there for a long time,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-51085538717085603992013-01-23T12:15:40.588-08:002013-01-23T12:15:40.588-08:00A gate can close you in or set you free, very movi...A gate can close you in or set you free, very moving piece.rchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-63870886563826488452013-01-23T11:58:46.217-08:002013-01-23T11:58:46.217-08:00Ah, what a vivid word picture. I can see that chil...Ah, what a vivid word picture. I can see that child too in all her innocence, not knowing yet that there will be many fences to hurdle. So often I think young children feel invisible in some settings. I am glad this was not true with you at your grandmother's. Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-88958361649671131342013-01-23T10:54:24.490-08:002013-01-23T10:54:24.490-08:00Sherry, I LOVE the picture you paint, the rise and...Sherry, I LOVE the picture you paint, the rise and fall, the ebb and flow of color and shadow and light. So nostalgic, evoking pictures from my past. Thank-you for sharing this.Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-40857528277580353172013-01-23T10:21:03.949-08:002013-01-23T10:21:03.949-08:00Sometimes swinging on the gate enveloped in rose f...Sometimes swinging on the gate enveloped in rose fragrance is just where we belong.aelfbeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06435434167680145600noreply@blogger.com