tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post7394278494679337806..comments2024-03-28T23:57:21.542-07:00Comments on STARDREAMING With Sherry Blue Sky: Rice KoanSherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-5257595264650547002012-07-02T11:43:07.762-07:002012-07-02T11:43:07.762-07:00oh! how beautiful! i want to smell rice- and rain-...oh! how beautiful! i want to smell rice- and rain-soaked earth.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-55521633079619794862012-07-02T01:53:16.863-07:002012-07-02T01:53:16.863-07:00Fantastic read. I showed my partner this.
"...Fantastic read. I showed my partner this.<br /><br />"Look! Someone wrote a poem about rice..."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-18067152597352036512012-07-01T19:18:00.239-07:002012-07-01T19:18:00.239-07:00Wonderful job with this form!Wonderful job with this form!Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-8577960032070975442012-07-01T14:06:55.223-07:002012-07-01T14:06:55.223-07:00This is wonderful Sherry..The senses are engaged i...This is wonderful Sherry..The senses are engaged in sound, sight, and smell. Beautiful!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-10328459792752636372012-07-01T11:49:25.916-07:002012-07-01T11:49:25.916-07:00I love the way the 1st 2 lines open up the sense o...I love the way the 1st 2 lines open up the sense of sound, the next one tingles with smell, and the last line paints a picture.<br />Very sensual indeed :)Karishma Shettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10183133674860648743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-39113188148890742332012-07-01T10:45:12.146-07:002012-07-01T10:45:12.146-07:00I like what you did with this form--which still se...I like what you did with this form--which still seems a little mystifying to me! I have to go read more about it.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-72748037402406376802012-07-01T06:01:03.966-07:002012-07-01T06:01:03.966-07:00Oh, wow, Sherry!! I love the variation in line thr...Oh, wow, Sherry!! I love the variation in line three...the harmony of all the lines together and the suggestion of the state of things in your closing line. This is brilliant!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-69887717921518038692012-06-30T18:16:06.837-07:002012-06-30T18:16:06.837-07:00Beautiful ~ I love the last line ~Beautiful ~ I love the last line ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-87062565814983454372012-06-30T15:13:18.422-07:002012-06-30T15:13:18.422-07:00Your Koan tantatalises all the senses magically! R...Your Koan tantatalises all the senses magically! Really beautiful!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-61387292215465023642012-06-30T14:12:03.441-07:002012-06-30T14:12:03.441-07:00That's very good, Sherry!That's very good, Sherry!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-47304451941252580672012-06-30T13:57:33.407-07:002012-06-30T13:57:33.407-07:00Wow, you did a killer job with this one! Amazing.....Wow, you did a killer job with this one! Amazing... The third line took us elsewhere and then back to reality...Bravo!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-88713529606155778122012-06-30T12:20:52.000-07:002012-06-30T12:20:52.000-07:00Loved what you did with this form, Sherry! A wonde...Loved what you did with this form, Sherry! A wonderful write.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-49952849170607729862012-06-30T12:18:54.726-07:002012-06-30T12:18:54.726-07:00lovely take Sherry.monsoon is approaching here.and...lovely take Sherry.monsoon is approaching here.and I adore the smell of rain-soaked earth!Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-25714187616558384332012-06-30T11:47:16.668-07:002012-06-30T11:47:16.668-07:00Oh, how lovely. Your third line is a surprise, and...Oh, how lovely. Your third line is a surprise, and created such visual impact - I could see the moment so clearly. And I loved the subtlety of the last line. Excellent.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com