tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post5191990588204198094..comments2024-03-28T01:58:52.724-07:00Comments on STARDREAMING With Sherry Blue Sky: Stuck on a Reef in the Tunnel of LoveSherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-62761001777167149642013-06-03T18:41:53.306-07:002013-06-03T18:41:53.306-07:00Your humor makes it so fun to read!
Loved it
:DYour humor makes it so fun to read!<br />Loved it<br />:DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-68208030014688855432013-06-03T17:41:40.599-07:002013-06-03T17:41:40.599-07:00i think it's cute and clever, especially that ...i think it's cute and clever, especially that you wrote off a prompt. ed pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14810299925068571517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-71248115987237294722013-06-03T13:16:37.894-07:002013-06-03T13:16:37.894-07:00well I just loved it Sherry :)well I just loved it Sherry :)Celestial Dreamzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-21623932563996080082013-06-03T05:14:00.757-07:002013-06-03T05:14:00.757-07:00Hi Sherry! Yes, I remember those rides, always on ...Hi Sherry! Yes, I remember those rides, always on water--reefs are a real hazard :-) enjoyed your triolet!Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-67088385099822875492013-06-03T04:40:35.847-07:002013-06-03T04:40:35.847-07:00There are so many reef to get stuck on and most of...There are so many reef to get stuck on and most of us get hung up on them and let love pass by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-16284316715310363412013-06-03T04:28:15.638-07:002013-06-03T04:28:15.638-07:00I think your triolet works... and yes, that's ...I think your triolet works... and yes, that's how I remember the tunnel of love rides too:-)Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-2394441698580729382013-06-02T23:08:08.951-07:002013-06-02T23:08:08.951-07:00I enjoyed it! Thanks!
Madeleine Begun KaneI enjoyed it! Thanks!<br /><br /><a href="http://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/" rel="nofollow">Madeleine Begun Kane</a><br /><br />Madeleine Begun Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12290268300271622956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-3618413419323606242013-06-02T20:44:13.754-07:002013-06-02T20:44:13.754-07:00LOL..I think the triolet worked well At least you ...LOL..I think the triolet worked well At least you gave it a shot...more practice that's what's needed:)..the love thing not the triolet:)rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-67443248768070255902013-06-02T18:14:51.580-07:002013-06-02T18:14:51.580-07:00The tunnel of love can lead to lots of fun experie...The tunnel of love can lead to lots of fun experiences. And it's all the more fun when two young hearts find the time for it. Nicely Sherry!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-85436738231739400152013-06-02T17:13:43.628-07:002013-06-02T17:13:43.628-07:00Love the image and where you took it. And loved th...Love the image and where you took it. And loved the new form, it works well with your sense of humor. This was fun to read.<br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/06/02/awakening-a-body-once-living/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-29614995955429706252013-06-02T12:51:05.750-07:002013-06-02T12:51:05.750-07:00I've got the perfect tune for that, what a won...I've got the perfect tune for that, what a wonderful poemLLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-40219963805187513302013-06-02T12:03:57.192-07:002013-06-02T12:03:57.192-07:00nice, Sherry! i love the triolet form.nice, Sherry! i love the triolet form.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-20705939850800950492013-06-02T08:41:57.052-07:002013-06-02T08:41:57.052-07:00I don't remember ever being in a tunnel of lo...I don't remember ever being in a tunnel of love. But your poem made me think that hopefully life is our tunnel of love.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-33153012538838587132013-06-02T04:41:57.575-07:002013-06-02T04:41:57.575-07:00loved every bit of it:)loved every bit of it:)Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-68711619597365480192013-06-01T22:03:03.809-07:002013-06-01T22:03:03.809-07:00Great triolet..the repetition is so effective!Great triolet..the repetition is so effective!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-58988997383396121112013-06-01T20:22:44.153-07:002013-06-01T20:22:44.153-07:00Me too! I remember that ride. As I recall, they w...Me too! I remember that ride. As I recall, they were tubby little vessels with big rubber bumpers. Either that, or at least three of us are blithely bobbing along in a common ether. Thank you for the introduction to a triolet--I love learning about new forms.<br />Your poem is rhythmically cohesive, fluid and comically perceptive about the perils of love.<br />gabriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-71823048613446737112013-06-01T17:14:21.420-07:002013-06-01T17:14:21.420-07:00Lovely form, the repetition makes this a happy los...Lovely form, the repetition makes this a happy loss, almost.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-27736272462167633302013-06-01T14:41:35.374-07:002013-06-01T14:41:35.374-07:00Good shot at the triolet, pal. I love form challen...Good shot at the triolet, pal. I love form challenges, but am hesitant about trying them on my own. Okay, more than just hesitant...absolutely cowardly.<br />Well done (and I know about that reef).<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-64237107068281174592013-06-01T14:19:46.066-07:002013-06-01T14:19:46.066-07:00Love the metaphor!! And kudos on the triolet!!
I...Love the metaphor!! And kudos on the triolet!! <br /><br />I enjoy this visual, Sherry, "Charted my way in by the North Star's glow"<br /><br />So beautiful!<br /><br />Thank you for writing!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-30211157361168092652013-06-01T13:20:57.530-07:002013-06-01T13:20:57.530-07:00THAT was not a dream ... though we were much much ...THAT was not a dream ... though we were much much younger. I remember smooching in the Tunnel of Love. Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-10248375685413780962013-06-01T11:06:18.428-07:002013-06-01T11:06:18.428-07:00Yay! A triolet! I'm so happy to see you tried ...Yay! A triolet! I'm so happy to see you tried your hand at this form, Sherry. Each line is superb and your repeating line carries the reader along. Blast those reefs and leaky boats!Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-70493973303904439322013-06-01T10:31:54.178-07:002013-06-01T10:31:54.178-07:00Ha, sometimes the Tunnel of Love has a lot of pitf...Ha, sometimes the Tunnel of Love has a lot of pitfalls! Fun poem, Sherry.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com