The small cottage on Christleton Avenue
in the '50's: peonies, pinks, sweet pea, their scent
mingling on the breeze; me drifting
in the hammock - my boat of dreams -
under the weeping willow.
The little house on Ethel Street,
full of leggy, laughing children,
who disco-danced during sleepover evenings
for my weekend entertainment; the garden
out back, the swish-swish-swish of the sprinkler
in the early morning, before the children woke.
The coffeehouse, full of stained glass, music
and hanging plants, where people believed in me
till I could believe in myself - where my heart melted,
growing ten sizes, big enough
to make a mighty leap:
to Tofino, place of my dreams: wild waves,
old growth forests, eagles and herons
and wolves padding softly, one of whom
came to stay.
Then away, to my little green trailer
out Beaver Creek, Pup's kingdom,
after we lost our heart place by the sea.
And oh, Pup! I will remember most of all -
his wild wild ways, his loud loud bark,
his knowing eyes, true mate of my wilderness soul.
The one I hope will greet me
when I reach the spirit world.
The one I hope will greet me
when I reach the spirit world.
And the very last thing of all: one last look
at the blue sky, companion of all my days,
always changing, ever-beautiful,
that kept me forever Looking Up.
* Title and inspiration taken from Joyce Sutphen's wonderful poem of the same title.
for my prompt at What's Going On : The Last Things I'll Remember





Great photos! I love those old world flowers: the peonies and sweet peas. Remember Sweet williams? Pretty Pup. You must miss him so.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lot of wonderful memories, Sherry! And beautiful photos. Ah, I too have memories of some coffeehouse days where I listened to wonderful music, and there were such feelings of warmth and caring! And yes, Pup! I love this photo of him -- such a wonderful companion!
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Wow! I love how your memories flow from place to place until the two that accompanied you everywhere: Pup and the sky. Such good sensual memories.
Absolutely gorgeous... one of you best. I'll read it a few more times, Rall
ReplyDeleteYour "the very last thing" stole my heart Sherry. "Looking Up" should be the motto of all souls. What grand moments of life you've shared with us today. And Pup's photo is beyond beautiful.
ReplyDeleteMay you always look up as well as back - I love the photo of you and your children - you all looked happy in the moment - beautiful rememberings - Jae
ReplyDeleteIt does us good to go back, even here. Thank you for prompting us to examine the memories. I feel from experience for your remembrance of Pup, he can never be forgotten I know. Pretty dog too.
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