tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post9038854017426887126..comments2024-03-28T08:56:57.555-07:00Comments on STARDREAMING With Sherry Blue Sky: Wounded JaguarSherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-25726409560557427452015-07-02T21:27:43.973-07:002015-07-02T21:27:43.973-07:00Mystical, It feels like there is a lesson reaching...Mystical, It feels like there is a lesson reaching through the dream. I wish I had such vivid dreams.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-1705778383856278812015-07-02T07:09:33.641-07:002015-07-02T07:09:33.641-07:00Yeah, good choice on the repetition for the dreami...Yeah, good choice on the repetition for the dreaminess! Nice, nice.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-5577401182760197332015-07-01T09:22:55.848-07:002015-07-01T09:22:55.848-07:00The form adds the somewhat chaotic feel of dream t...The form adds the somewhat chaotic feel of dream to this, where images are stark and large than life, swirling in and out. Love the jaguar's eyes.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-57822970131141771892015-07-01T07:47:26.843-07:002015-07-01T07:47:26.843-07:00nice how you weave your way in and out of the drea...nice how you weave your way in and out of the dream that kinda connects the characters in hereClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-51877613676869938802015-07-01T00:20:28.064-07:002015-07-01T00:20:28.064-07:00This is a form I always struggle with ~ you have n...This is a form I always struggle with ~ you have nailed it in beautiful fashion. Lovely piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-91359916640591743622015-06-30T21:14:32.349-07:002015-06-30T21:14:32.349-07:00I'm liking this, Sherry. It was a nice dream,...I'm liking this, Sherry. It was a nice dream, one that a person likes to remem..ber. Also Iearned a new word, "<i>shaman</i>".<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-68400326839164631512015-06-30T20:00:27.271-07:002015-06-30T20:00:27.271-07:00This is really inspired, Sherry.This is really inspired, Sherry.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-68787678980081073622015-06-30T19:49:04.439-07:002015-06-30T19:49:04.439-07:00The opening line grabbed my attention right away.The opening line grabbed my attention right away.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-27203232896983856212015-06-30T18:51:34.041-07:002015-06-30T18:51:34.041-07:00A Pantoum rarely seen is a whiff of freshness Sher...A Pantoum rarely seen is a whiff of freshness Sherry! A wound anywhere, of the heart especially will take time to heal.<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-79715499283566970812015-06-30T17:36:30.060-07:002015-06-30T17:36:30.060-07:00Oh a mystic dream described in such a beautiful wa...Oh a mystic dream described in such a beautiful way. I like how you can write in a format so expertly. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-83974740070426106452015-06-30T16:52:33.197-07:002015-06-30T16:52:33.197-07:00Love this pantoum form. Love this pantoum form. rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-3753437555352851652015-06-30T13:35:28.371-07:002015-06-30T13:35:28.371-07:00This is such a wonderful poem Sherry. I loved the ...This is such a wonderful poem Sherry. I loved the way you portrayed the jaguar and how his wounds healed at the end. Well penned :D<br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-52591222134086162182015-06-30T13:25:27.589-07:002015-06-30T13:25:27.589-07:00Healing wounds in dreams can be just what reality ...Healing wounds in dreams can be just what reality needs. A lovely, atmospheric pantoum.Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-56989701573456413892015-06-30T12:16:14.315-07:002015-06-30T12:16:14.315-07:00Love the thought of healing the wounds. Sometimes ...Love the thought of healing the wounds. Sometimes the dreams is what we need to go on.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-90303746572602270782015-06-30T11:19:54.090-07:002015-06-30T11:19:54.090-07:00I am glad that the secret of healing wounds was re...I am glad that the secret of healing wounds was revealed.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-59132492563179120422015-06-30T11:06:10.447-07:002015-06-30T11:06:10.447-07:00Your skillful execution of pantoum always amazes m...Your skillful execution of pantoum always amazes me. And you never lose track of message, meaning, purpose. You were born to do this, Sherry.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-5193062198924538222015-06-30T10:31:00.699-07:002015-06-30T10:31:00.699-07:00Animal medicine is powerful. So are dreams. Animal medicine is powerful. So are dreams. colleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16669375650785054059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-7822445622090592082015-06-30T10:18:43.985-07:002015-06-30T10:18:43.985-07:00The repetition of lines adds to the peaceful, drea...The repetition of lines adds to the peaceful, dreamy feel of it. Very nicely done.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-61681584614701123652015-06-30T08:16:17.279-07:002015-06-30T08:16:17.279-07:00I thought that was a wonderful read. I thought that was a wonderful read. Blogorattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.com