tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post6129109960257857035..comments2024-03-28T12:12:43.989-07:00Comments on STARDREAMING With Sherry Blue Sky: RiversongSherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-44336615892767466052016-05-13T10:10:28.113-07:002016-05-13T10:10:28.113-07:00This song could easily be set to music. I hope you...This song could easily be set to music. I hope you do!Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-33945424772985108792016-05-10T15:21:20.597-07:002016-05-10T15:21:20.597-07:00A wonderful writing Sherry, you give the reader a ...A wonderful writing Sherry, you give the reader a passage to the wilderness and the acceptance into nature's arms. ScottlBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09147326078011352857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-91517488991177026062016-05-10T04:43:52.255-07:002016-05-10T04:43:52.255-07:00Oh Sherry you took me back to a younger self: wand...Oh Sherry you took me back to a younger self: wandering through the redwood forest, grasping for wisps of sunlight, decoding nature's messages, inhaling earth's bounty, racing with the river.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-87277997846121852342016-05-09T18:53:49.702-07:002016-05-09T18:53:49.702-07:00I see visions of a rambling woman tramping near th...I see visions of a rambling woman tramping near the river's edge - the timeless purity of following a wilderness trail is expressed so wonderfully, here. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-3246249562308707402016-05-09T17:45:42.179-07:002016-05-09T17:45:42.179-07:00What a lovely song Sherry ~ A delight to read ton...What a lovely song Sherry ~ A delight to read tonight ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-41818424327260526372016-05-08T20:10:01.035-07:002016-05-08T20:10:01.035-07:00Great job with the pantoum form. Congratulations o...Great job with the pantoum form. Congratulations on your poetry book.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-22991825193849131482016-05-08T19:33:43.341-07:002016-05-08T19:33:43.341-07:00Just beautiful.. how well it just flows with the f...Just beautiful.. how well it just flows with the form, loved it!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-18522338810222853062016-05-08T15:03:41.578-07:002016-05-08T15:03:41.578-07:00Ahh, that river and all the birds. You must know I...Ahh, that river and all the birds. You must know I'd love this one.<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-29466599100162888612016-05-08T09:16:00.791-07:002016-05-08T09:16:00.791-07:00Amen!!! May the river's beauty always sing. B...Amen!!! May the river's beauty always sing. Beautiful poem Sherry. To me it is a prayer.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-26260028627773554372016-05-08T09:15:48.985-07:002016-05-08T09:15:48.985-07:00Sherry, I really like that first line. I think mai...Sherry, I really like that first line. I think mainly because it sets the stage for a celebratory poem... but I feel like there's something sad lurking in this poem (but this might just be me). Really very nice. Matthew Henningsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05561605742904573649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-68229228829948146362016-05-08T08:33:12.656-07:002016-05-08T08:33:12.656-07:00such a lovely pantoum!
the sounds of the animals a...such a lovely pantoum!<br />the sounds of the animals adds to the lively feel and bounce of this poem. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-87052181070298566052016-05-08T08:18:36.825-07:002016-05-08T08:18:36.825-07:00Sigh what a beautiful song...I want to be there in...Sigh what a beautiful song...I want to be there in that place and dream my life away....I also love how you created a pantoum with this.Donnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13420133886162844400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-20243608074428806052016-05-08T07:37:17.532-07:002016-05-08T07:37:17.532-07:00songs of nature beguile you today in a most wonder...songs of nature beguile you today in a most wonderful way<br /><br />Happy Mothers Day Sherry<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-10585738244598718492016-05-08T05:56:43.436-07:002016-05-08T05:56:43.436-07:00Streams can be enchanting and mystical. The entire...Streams can be enchanting and mystical. The entire pace of the poem gave a relaxing feel, Sherry. The picture is a great addition to your poem. totomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-90152281884464707222016-05-08T04:26:50.006-07:002016-05-08T04:26:50.006-07:00all is beauty.I'm enchanted and beguiled.Sing ...all is beauty.I'm enchanted and beguiled.Sing me eagle's shriek <br />and Old Wolf's howl.Sing me a <br />song of river, green and wild<br /><br />It is so much fun to be with nature and all of its glory. Great lines Sherry!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-39715180493907793272016-05-08T02:50:48.326-07:002016-05-08T02:50:48.326-07:00Such a gorgeous call to nature in your verse Sherr...Such a gorgeous call to nature in your verse Sherry :D sigh beautifully executed!<br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-91152699776682723182016-05-08T02:44:24.325-07:002016-05-08T02:44:24.325-07:00May you always have the song of the river in your ...May you always have the song of the river in your heart - Raven's husky gobble-cry - that cracked on the page..so many textures and feelings and such a good play with form too!Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-88944487056549499562016-05-08T02:35:24.173-07:002016-05-08T02:35:24.173-07:00What a fine song! I hope someone puts it to music...What a fine song! I hope someone puts it to music we can sing in our circles and halls and walks and summer camps. I never realized how well the Pantoum rhymes and repeats for actual songs until I read this one full of celebration of life and sound.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-65978693872665874082016-05-08T02:01:22.503-07:002016-05-08T02:01:22.503-07:00Admire not only the imagery but also how well your...Admire not only the imagery but also how well your rhymes flow unconsciously - the 2nd line repeat is an interesting form for try out another timeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-82789253126122651472016-05-08T00:35:25.492-07:002016-05-08T00:35:25.492-07:00Beautiful.Beautiful.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-80199400148824761632016-05-08T00:00:42.744-07:002016-05-08T00:00:42.744-07:00The sound of nature is so enchanting... and along ...The sound of nature is so enchanting... and along the river it turns so much more loud and beautifulbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-85225554255396754242016-05-07T22:18:54.464-07:002016-05-07T22:18:54.464-07:00Oh, your nature poems always thrill me!Oh, your nature poems always thrill me!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-54381367709979733032016-05-07T14:23:53.425-07:002016-05-07T14:23:53.425-07:00What a beautiful song Sherry, one I want to sing a...What a beautiful song Sherry, one I want to sing along with. Like the river flowing your poem flows too.Bekkie Sanchezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16300001421561443693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-20643198759327890382016-05-07T11:02:02.481-07:002016-05-07T11:02:02.481-07:00There is so much beauty in the flow of a river as ...There is so much beauty in the flow of a river as it heads to the sea. Your poem is a celebration of rivers, Sherry!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-66561684426723327362016-05-07T09:44:07.782-07:002016-05-07T09:44:07.782-07:00'all is beauty'...indeed Sherry.'all is beauty'...indeed Sherry. Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.com