tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post1745836360920318093..comments2024-03-28T23:57:21.542-07:00Comments on STARDREAMING With Sherry Blue Sky: Opening Heaven's GateSherry Blue Skyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-82472512749521356642011-09-28T21:23:25.506-07:002011-09-28T21:23:25.506-07:00the blackbirds really have a power in stories.the blackbirds really have a power in stories.Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-59708395822929227262011-09-23T09:40:53.278-07:002011-09-23T09:40:53.278-07:00Both are lovely and heartfelt but I do prefer the ...Both are lovely and heartfelt but I do prefer the first one, especially:<br /><br />Blackbirds wheel across the skylaurie kolphttp://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-86540882180577015922011-09-23T09:37:53.578-07:002011-09-23T09:37:53.578-07:00Yours is the poem with a story behind it :)
Grann...Yours is the poem with a story behind it :) <br />Granny radar!! You are such a romantic...Shaistahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00259344471712162333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-14163530890575628172011-09-23T08:39:29.797-07:002011-09-23T08:39:29.797-07:00I enjoyed the first one. Sometimes no amount of ti...I enjoyed the first one. Sometimes no amount of time can dull the pain of missing someone we love. Lovely prose.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-29483913990314255312011-09-22T17:02:55.021-07:002011-09-22T17:02:55.021-07:00That's beautiful. I only read the first versio...That's beautiful. I only read the first version. I liked it so well, I didn't want to change anything.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-21747451236525706482011-09-22T06:54:21.255-07:002011-09-22T06:54:21.255-07:00You create such vivid images in my mind. I can fee...You create such vivid images in my mind. I can feel the blackbirds swirl in my mind and the longing touch of the poem.Salem Lorothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02786501839467653361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-50339984822820930532011-09-21T22:32:11.985-07:002011-09-21T22:32:11.985-07:00a sad song of a dove ... touching ... i loved the ...a sad song of a dove ... touching ... i loved the perfect way you have treated the form too ...Baishalihttp://www.moonlightanddreamz.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-87038681535597289872011-09-21T21:19:20.355-07:002011-09-21T21:19:20.355-07:00my heart turned your way with every beat...the str...my heart turned your way with every beat...the strength of love and the longing for what might have been....lovely workSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-24256956767776125752011-09-21T07:46:53.687-07:002011-09-21T07:46:53.687-07:00I enjoyed what you did with the sky and sky friend...I enjoyed what you did with the sky and sky friends.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-7707117655893176492011-09-20T21:39:04.704-07:002011-09-20T21:39:04.704-07:00lovelylovelylucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-43365159295034351052011-09-20T18:57:12.259-07:002011-09-20T18:57:12.259-07:00Sherry, I hear your cooing in this, it's a sad...Sherry, I hear your cooing in this, it's a sad song of a mourning dove.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-51667434681442208182011-09-20T18:42:44.413-07:002011-09-20T18:42:44.413-07:00Oh Sherry, so exposing and real! I loved it, but c...Oh Sherry, so exposing and real! I loved it, but could feel the pain. The time of loss and the stars not alining~ You did a great job with this form! The sorrow is so raw and real! Great job~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-73247122869801017952011-09-20T15:17:29.180-07:002011-09-20T15:17:29.180-07:00"My heart turned your way with every beat&quo..."My heart turned your way with every beat" is a great line, Sherry.<br />— K<br /><br />Kay, Alberta, Canada<br />An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous TravelKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-56137232137927358972011-09-20T13:58:17.146-07:002011-09-20T13:58:17.146-07:00the pantoum is a perfect form for you, sherry. lon...the pantoum is a perfect form for you, sherry. longing, nature, beauty and all that. this is beautiful!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-6003135513277975822011-09-20T13:56:36.087-07:002011-09-20T13:56:36.087-07:00Oh, this broke my heart, Sherry; yet, as Robert sa...Oh, this broke my heart, Sherry; yet, as Robert said, it has a sweetness to it. Bittersweet. Love's possibilities are endless; so, too, are its outcomes.<br /><br />Have to say, I liked the first version better, but brava! for going after the form! (I'm so chicken, BRAWWWWK!) AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5777854594703553858.post-58436715901132475242011-09-20T12:38:17.580-07:002011-09-20T12:38:17.580-07:00I love the longing I felt with this poem. It to m...I love the longing I felt with this poem. It to me feels as a missed chance of love. I would consider it a sweet sorrow. Its a lovely poem Sherry.Robert Lloydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09536151998025229196noreply@blogger.com