Thursday, September 9, 2010

Walls

[Response to Poets United Think Tank Prompt #14 - Walls]

The walls came up
so high
no man
could climb over
them,
even with
their cleated shoes,
even with their
manly determination,

but my friends did.
By waiting gently outside,
watering the blooms
and weeds
around
my front gate,
waiting for me to
feel safe enough
to open the door,
to pass through the gate,
to walk with them
side by side
down the
winding path.

23 comments:

  1. Sherry this is a beautiful and moving piece, that is what friends are for, and this expresses it so beautifully!
    Pamela

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  2. Thanks, Pamela. It is funny, I was wrestling with the whole Walls concept, trying to work up a whole epic, and suddenly I thought of this and wrote it in two seconds. It is so true. Friends rock!

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  3. this is beautiful moving piece on how the love of friends can melt even the highest of walls...really nice....bkm

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  4. Beautifully crafted work, Sherry! A wonderful take on the prompt!

    -Weasel =)

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  5. sherry... yes... you reminded me something... friends do manage to climb over walls or wait for us to open our doors... thank you for a lovely thought..

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  6. There are few things more comforting than the shelter to be found in a trusted friend...this poem illustrates that beautifully, Sherry. So glad I get to call you friend...:)

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  7. "but my friends did." <---love that part, mainly because...that's how I usually begin my pieces; with half finished sentences, I start fire lol. I like this one, if it were pie...I'd eat it......mmm....pie...

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  8. Oh I just love this, so wonderfully gentle, a lovely poem ...
    and thank you for your lovely comment Sherry :o)

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  9. I love this. A friend just wants to be there, for us, in our best selves. No agenda :) BTW, what a beautiful picture of you xx

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  10. A beautiful poem of friendship, Sherry. Walking side by side down the path is just so RIGHT!

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  11. Nice to think of friends awaiting you outside the gate! Very touching!

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  12. Thank you, gentle readers.......this one came easily, once I thought of the word "friends" :)

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  13. You managed to find the positive in what is a very negative aspect of human consciousness. I felt my heart opening up as I read the second stanza.

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  14. Sherry,
    In times of trouble, it is wonderful to have friends that you can trust and depend on.
    A trouble shared.......
    Best wishes,
    Eileen

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  15. Absolutely amazing, and I do agreed with Eileen, it is always good to have someone by your side in times of trouble =D

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  16. Hi my friend...I am back and it is lovely to be greeted by a gentle shower of warmth in this poem.

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  17. Wow, I have never written a poem so fast or easily, and it gets the best comments:) Thank you so much!

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  18. I love but my friends did! Be opening.... It is a lovely reminder of being kind, being open, being true~
    Another approach~Kindness!

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  19. positive energy of a wall from you.
    beautiful poem!

    my wall entry

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  20. How amazing to have friends willing to wait. Excellent poem!

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  21. Sherry this is beautiful and inspiring...the patience of a true friend is a blessed thing.
    :-)

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  22. Hi Sherry I like this a lot and hope that trip keeps getting better everyday :)

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